Ophilia Melody is the Silencer; an Enforcer and assassin for the Melody Mafia Family. Vivian Scratch is VeeVee; a gang boss and ex-fiend. Their pasts are linked by love; their present, by violence. But have they changed too much to be together?
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I was a bit disappointed to see the word count for this chapter, but the content has more then made up for it.
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Yes, this isn't a very long chapter, but for good reason. I didn't want to pad it with needless filler and take away from the emotional impact delivered in this scene.
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A good point, one I struggle to follow myself
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It's not just you, believe me. I had to rewrite it several times to trim it down; hence why it took so long.
This entire chapter just screams "the Godfather". While I'd never imagined either Octavia or vinyl being in a mafia style story, I find myself loving it
Ok, so I'm absolutely hooked now. The first couple chapters had been fantastic, but the deeper I dig the more I love this story! I'd loved BBaB, simply because of the way you chose to write Tavi and Vi. This is promising to provide something wholly different, the crime elements are harking back to some of my favorite tropes, and the visualization of the scenes are spot on as usual.
Quality over quantity, my friend. That's something I have learned during my time here.
Honestly, I'm kinda surprised (in a good way) at how human Charles is, for lack of better words. Mainly because the last time I read a fic where a character's dad was a mob boss, he had that character tortured and experimented on.