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it's a good end, but the change from "It's over!" to "Yes! I'll marry you!" is literally a few lines!! It's too rushed!
Also, you might want to add in breaks when there is a change in viewpoint.
All in all, it's a good end to the trilogy.
-Twilight_Scratch
This was cute, I liked it
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Thanks. :)
A very satisfying end to a great trilogy. although I would have liked to see Vinyl give a hearty "Fuck you!" to Octavia's parents. Great ending, I knew those two would get together.
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Doing what she did in front of her parents was a fuck you in a sense. She learned some class from Octavia in a sense. :P
4949160 Huh, I didn't consider that. Anyways, i'm glad it all worked out in the end. As usual, The writing was descriptive, believable and without any glaring errors and the characters were lovable while still stating true to the way we believe they would act..
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Thank you for all of your support. :) I really appreciate it.
At the part where they were fighting and Vinyl said about how millions of fans could be screaming their names, I imagined Octavia whispering "The only person I want to scream my name is you..."
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Nice. :) I should've thought of that.
There REALLY needs to be a separation when it changes scenery. I was so confused when the first change happened.
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It's fixed. So sorry about that. My computer glitched and for whatever reason I didn't catch it. I really hope that makes it easier for people to read. I can't believe I didn't catch that. -face hoof-
This was a great and beautiful ending to the love between Vinyl and Octavia.
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Thanks.
Such a good series I enjoyed all of the stories. I really loved this ending I think you did it the best it could possibly be done and I'm actually a little sad it's over now ;( but that's ok cause it was a fun ride while it lasted congratulations my friend you have created something truly beautiful here
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Wow what a FANTASTIC series, thank you for your service of a wonderful Octascratch FanFic
I CAME
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Thanks. ./////. I'm so glad that you liked it.
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>//////< I think that's the best compliment you can get from this kind of thing...
This story has made me take a moment an reevaluate my life and high school. Just bravo, bravo good sir. Now I must be off to make some changes.
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Good sir? O////O I'm a mare not a stallion. But I appreciate your input. ^^
5329884 Jolly co-operation! i miss Brolaire of astora.
Really enjoyed this entire series! Been saving it up for when my parents had a night out..
And it was so worth it! Love how you depicted their personalities and the realistic conflict of interest between the two of them and the sex was a major plus too
Thanks for the awesome stories!
I love it! Such a brilliant trilogy! *applause*