Thanks for the update oh man can't wait to read what Celestia's reaction will be when she finds out who the dark apprentice is but I think that shining armors reaction will be hilarious when or if he finds out
NYAH HaaaHaaaHaaHAAA! IT'S HE-ERE! Heeheeeheeheeeheeeheeeeeheeee... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA! "What are you doing?" "Rainbow, do you want to make some cupcakes?" "Uh... no, thanks. Not today."
Oh no, its not as If I planned to get any sleep tonight... It was worth it though, this story is the most entertaining one I've had the chance to read today considering how much is out there.
Great chapter! I'm really looking forward to the next one and seeing how this plays out. And what happens when Celestia tells Shining about the newest development. And the shenanigans that ensue afterwards.
I'm interested to see where this goes--whether Celestia chooses to keep Twilight on as her apprentice, whether she has her do the ritual for the apprentice of the light, and whether she truly does remain unangry at Twilight.
Stories like this are one of the few times I read clop. It's refreshing to see sex with a well thought out plot, rather than just obvious mundane filler leading up to empty inconsequential sex.
1262116 I'm glad you like it. Originally I had this really serious vision for the story, kind of an emotional drama. But then I figured that wasn't really my thing and I'd just have fun with it—not take it too seriously, make a lot of jokes. I'm happy that despite that it's still coming through as a story.
Huzzah! An update hath been bestowed upon our mortal selves. I was really wondering how the Luna / Twilight relationship and dynamic would evolve after Twilight actually became the Dark Apprentice. Color me intrigued. I also am eagerly awaiting both Celestia's reaction and how Twilight decides to make use of her newfound "skill set" as this progresses. Overall a good introduction to what will happen now that Twi's joined the dark side. Can't wait for more!
Luna is such a troll. Not only in the fact that she most definitely trolled Twilight, but also in the fact that she is most certainly trolling Celestia.
I want to see Twilight be the Dark Apprentice and the Faithful Student. >.> At the same time. It'd make sense, Twilight is the period between the day and the night... when there is both light and shadow. That and I kind of like OP Twilight...
NEW UPDATE!!!!! WOOOOHOOOO!!!!!
now to read
Awsome!! I can hardly wait for the next chapter!!
also FIRST!!
YYEEEEEEESSSSSSS!!!!!!!! ALLLL THE UPDATES :pinkie happy:
Will you add more chapters in a short span (three chapters) like you did before the interlude?
So good. I can't believe I had to wait so long. Grrrr. It tried my patience for a while.
Anyways, onto the mistakes:
I would rather you do as wish in this matter - as you wish?
Luna’sr chest
Ah, an update. And it was... delicious. My thanks, good author.
Dear Celestia
So I might be your sisters sexual apprentice.
Hope that's cool.
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Thanks! I can never get them all.
Yes an update!
Okay Twilight take your new found abilities and practice with your friend.
Which friend?
All of them. And try to seduce Celestia too, as extra credit.
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilightclopple.png Oh my.
Edit: Seduce all the ponies.
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa its here
...I'm guessing Celestia's reaction will involve th' RCV and smashing of doors.
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at least thats better than dear Celestia,
I kinda just fucked your sister. Hope your not mad
sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
It's about time this updated! Way to leave us hanging for a few months!
*looks at own fics*
... I'll shut up now.
Thanks for the update oh man can't wait to read what Celestia's reaction will be when she finds out who the dark apprentice is but I think that shining armors reaction will be hilarious when or if he finds out
*sees update*
What could it be...?
*sees it's "The Dark Apprentice"*
*struggles to hide squee*
huzzah! great to see the next chapter!
oh you have a spelling error.
“I... just... have sex with me again!” Twilight new it was the wrong answer as soon as the words left her mouth.
new = knew
U-U-U-U-U-U-U-UPDATE!!!!
Well then...200?
Neat story.
I find it damn funny.
I rather enjoyed the whole "This is where I teach you _____ but you're Twilight Sparkle." parts. I found that hilarious.
Royal Canterlot Facehoofing is to be had in the imminent future.
NYAH HaaaHaaaHaaHAAA!
IT'S HE-ERE!
Heeheeeheeheeeheeeheeeeeheeee...
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA!
"What are you doing?"
"Rainbow, do you want to make some cupcakes?"
"Uh... no, thanks. Not today."
Oh no, its not as If I planned to get any sleep tonight...
It was worth it though, this story is the most entertaining one I've had the chance to read today considering how much is out there.
Celestia's face when she receives Twilight's letter:
fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/138/6/0/shocked_celestia_by_enma_darei-d3gmlsq.png
Great chapter! I'm really looking forward to the next one and seeing how this plays out. And what happens when Celestia tells Shining about the newest development. And the shenanigans that ensue afterwards.
Making us wait like Luna made Twilight wait.
I see what you did there.
Awesome update, can't wait for more
This was wonderful. Thank you for the update.
Yay! Reading it now...
1262076 that look on Tia's face
Run, Pinkie. You are about to be a test subject.
...er, nevermind.
Nice update!
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I know, right?! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
I'm interested to see where this goes--whether Celestia chooses to keep Twilight on as her apprentice, whether she has her do the ritual for the apprentice of the light, and whether she truly does remain unangry at Twilight.
Stories like this are one of the few times I read clop. It's refreshing to see sex with a well thought out plot, rather than just obvious mundane filler leading up to empty inconsequential sex.
1262110 hell ya dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Vinyl_Scratch_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
and just as a general comment....listening to the perfect song for this fic
Head Like A Hole - Nine Inch Nails
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More more more
Please tell me you will have more soon, I needs it
uuuupdate! yay!
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I'm glad you like it. Originally I had this really serious vision for the story, kind of an emotional drama. But then I figured that wasn't really my thing and I'd just have fun with it—not take it too seriously, make a lot of jokes. I'm happy that despite that it's still coming through as a story.
Love love love MOOOOOORRRRREEEEE PLEASE!!!!!!!!
Why no luna faces AARRRRGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!
Huzzah! An update hath been bestowed upon our mortal selves. I was really wondering how the Luna / Twilight relationship and dynamic would evolve after Twilight actually became the Dark Apprentice. Color me intrigued. I also am eagerly awaiting both Celestia's reaction and how Twilight decides to make use of her newfound "skill set" as this progresses. Overall a good introduction to what will happen now that Twi's joined the dark side. Can't wait for more!
Please... Update sooner then last time... Please...
YES! yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes!
Can't wait to see what happens with Princess Celestia!
Luna is such a troll.
Not only in the fact that she most definitely trolled Twilight,
but also in the fact that she is most certainly trolling Celestia.
Can hardly wait for the next chapter.
FINALLY AN UPDATE! And woohoo, fantastic! I loved it, and love the idea behind this all! More more now!
Pfffft, who needs sleep? Not like I have to be up in 3 hours or anything...
Awesome chapter. Keep them coming please.
Huzzah!!!!
Oh my! FInally updated.
I'll read it after work!
Wow!!!!!
Heh;
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She still look pristine and flawless. That should probably be looked
Hmm, Lunas teaching method certainly is different. Twilight's right, she's in deep.
IT UPDATED! OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edit: And it was awesome. Can't wait for the next one!
an update!!
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Your picture is damn good!!!!!! While Tia's reading Twilight's letter.
Shining Armor: WHAT!?
Cadance, Princess of Love: WHAT!?
Celesita: LUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNA!!!!!!!!!!!
I want to see Twilight be the Dark Apprentice and the Faithful Student. >.> At the same time. It'd make sense, Twilight is the period between the day and the night... when there is both light and shadow. That and I kind of like OP Twilight...