I could have your babies right now, at this exact moment. This chapter... delicious. Wonder how Celestia's gonna take the news... and how/when will Twilight finally tell her, for that matter?
Seems shorter than the previous ones. Still good though. Looking forward to seeing what some of the dark magics hold, and the next installment of this story. Thanks for the read so far.
So apparently secrets are like stuff. Who knew? But in all seriousness, it was a pretty good chapter, if extremely short. I hope this means we're going to be seeing more of this story again? I did so enjoy the premise.
So uh, Luna's seeming pretty sinister here. What with her apparent belief that only a little amount of morals are necessary, and plots and such. Wondering what her end game is. Though I'm pretty stoked that they're going to forgo the sex stuff and get to dark magic. In fact, all I'm hoping is that this doesn't go the way of Romance Reports into some other pairing.
An unexpected update, how excellent. This is one of my favorite TwiLuna stories. I did not expect the mention of Cadence. I will be watching to see how that distraction goes. I hope this update is a herald for more to follow shortly.
Hmm..... I can actually see Cadance being as perverted as Luna is. It's not in everyone's headcanon, but she is the princess of Love, after all. Curious indeed.
Hmmm... Sneaky Luna is sneaky. I wonder, can she truly out play Celestia? Don't think she is being evil though. I would say she is more of the blue and orange morality, but she seems to view morality itself as something best avoided. No, that's not right. Hmm... Maybe it's just best to say she feels above it. I wonder, will she try to push that view onto Twilight?
I would really enjoy the story adding in more parts of intrigue and magic, while keeping the cloppy bits at regular intervals. As always, superb writing, looking forward to more.
This better not be a tease. If it is, by Celestia, by Luna, and by whatever you may hold sacred, I will sic Pinkie Pie on you. And you will never be the same.
She rides across that ass, The thoroughbred of sin, She got the buttplug that You just pushed in, It needs lubrication So let the sex begin, A heinous kink, now plow that horse A shocker would be kinky, of course.
Bad Horse! Bad Horse! Bad Horse! She's Bad!
The Nightmare League of Nightmares Is clopping, so beware The ass that you receive Won't be your last, we swear! So make the Bad Horse cum Or she'll make you her mare . . . Get lubed up There's lots of intercourse It's Hi-Ho Sexy! Came Bad Horse
Credit to Pallydan for this (who hasn't read it yet but has heard my recommendation,) I just read this and had to comment with a filk of that song but wasn't clever enough to do it myself.
Anyway, props to Luna for proving, once again, that Evil is always sexier than Good. Especially when it's an acceptable evil like trolling the crap out of your sister by shattewing her fwagile wittle perception of reawity. Evil for all the right reasons.
And it just occurred to me that this is more of a chess game than I first realized, as they've both picked their queens... who are probably going to remain entirely unaware that they've been set against each-other. This is going to be HILARIOUS!
Bouncing against the bed, tablet in hand, Greenfang Everlasting slowly pleasures himself, wishing he had the right to be the one and only, Dark Apprentice.
So, this story isn't dead... good I'm happy to see an update, this is one of my favorite Luna fics that I have yet to finish. I would love to see more frequent updates... please?
The only time I've experienced a dead fic returning from the dead, was with Sharing the Night. Last update was June, then it updated 25th of December :3
Now you've peeked my other interest... Someone tryign to kill morals (or enjoys breaking them) I look forward to one or both of the wonderful looking cakes at the table. I can only wish you luck.
Well, this should be interesting. I wonder just what she has in mind?
On a somewhat related note, the whole "not quite an expression" thing got kinda repetitive near the end. You might want to adjust that to say something else for one of them.
Hmm, is Twilight merely a tool in Luna's plot to take power?
Oh, that last line was perfect.
It... updated?
Commence read.
An interlude into the mind of a chess master.
I could have your babies right now, at this exact moment. This chapter... delicious. Wonder how Celestia's gonna take the news... and how/when will Twilight finally tell her, for that matter?
seriously overdoing the whole analogy thing
oh luna you are just too much.
Wow. You have a very determined Luna.
I must say I like this. She's delicious.
Seems shorter than the previous ones. Still good though. Looking forward to seeing what some of the dark magics hold, and the next installment of this story. Thanks for the read so far.
So apparently secrets are like stuff. Who knew? But in all seriousness, it was a pretty good chapter, if extremely short. I hope this means we're going to be seeing more of this story again? I did so enjoy the premise.
Suddenly, Luna looks irrevocably... evil.
So uh, Luna's seeming pretty sinister here. What with her apparent belief that only a little amount of morals are necessary, and plots and such. Wondering what her end game is. Though I'm pretty stoked that they're going to forgo the sex stuff and get to dark magic. In fact, all I'm hoping is that this doesn't go the way of Romance Reports into some other pairing.
This was really good. Hopefully it's a sign this story has awoken from its slumber.
FOUR MONTHS FOR A SIX HUNDRED WORD INTERLUDE?!!
An unexpected update, how excellent. This is one of my favorite TwiLuna stories. I did not expect the mention of Cadence. I will be watching to see how that distraction goes. I hope this update is a herald for more to follow shortly.
I got so excited to see this update. I hope more chapters are on the way.
I was just on tumblr not five minutes ago when the thought occurred to me: "what if The Dark Apprentice updated today?"
AND IT DID.
Am I psychic??
Regardless, interesting developments here. I will be interested to see where this leads......
Short, sweet and leaves me wanting more. Well done good author, I shall await the next update eagerly.
2114817 I know When I saw it in the featured box I was
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
Sees it's an interlude
FFFFFFFFFFUUUUU
Don't you dare be teasing us, son.
Hmm..... I can actually see Cadance being as perverted as Luna is. It's not in everyone's headcanon, but she is the princess of Love, after all. Curious indeed.
Now stop teasing.
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLY FUCKIN' MOSES IT UPDATED!
Hmmm...
Sneaky Luna is sneaky. I wonder, can she truly out play Celestia?
Don't think she is being evil though. I would say she is more of the blue and orange morality, but she seems to view morality itself as something best avoided. No, that's not right. Hmm... Maybe it's just best to say she feels above it. I wonder, will she try to push that view onto Twilight?
I would really enjoy the story adding in more parts of intrigue and magic, while keeping the cloppy bits at regular intervals. As always, superb writing, looking forward to more.
I thought you might have died of dysentery on the Oregon TrailXD
This better not be a tease. If it is, by Celestia, by Luna, and by whatever you may hold sacred, I will sic Pinkie Pie on you. And you will never be the same.
Hmm, that's an interesting look into the mind of Luna.
Dat revive...hopefully the next chapter won't take as long...
What is this doing here?
HUZZAH!
Welcome back to the land of the living!
Even ze eenterludes ah grasheful! Ha... I was saddened that it wasn't a full chapter, but it offered some nice insight.
Is Luna turning into me? Cause theres only room for one heartless bastard here.
......
we waited half the Minnesotan winter for an update.... and you gave us an interlude....
*repeatedly tries to break rock with face*
2114958 Ahem, 'Morality in shades of grey' is best applicable here, i believe.
2115232 I direct you to my friend Sadistic Nerd. He's as heartless as they come.
One of the classics to be i think,
But morals only exist as long as we let them linger in the aither. P.S. love the Ben Franklen esk comparisons.
I really thought this story was dead. Being proven wrong has never made me happier.
2115266 i read sweet apple massacre. And laughed. I also like gory, graphic revenge fics. But only when the drive makes sense.
Bad Horse!
Bad Horse!
Bad Horse!
Bad Horse!
She rides across that ass, The thoroughbred of sin,
She got the buttplug that You just pushed in,
It needs lubrication So let the sex begin,
A heinous kink, now plow that horse
A shocker would be kinky, of course.
Bad Horse!
Bad Horse!
Bad Horse!
She's Bad!
The Nightmare League of Nightmares
Is clopping, so beware
The ass that you receive
Won't be your last, we swear!
So make the Bad Horse cum
Or she'll make you her mare . . .
Get lubed up
There's lots of intercourse
It's Hi-Ho Sexy!
Came Bad Horse
Credit to Pallydan for this (who hasn't read it yet but has heard my recommendation,) I just read this and had to comment with a filk of that song but wasn't clever enough to do it myself.
Anyway, props to Luna for proving, once again, that Evil is always sexier than Good. Especially when it's an acceptable evil like trolling the crap out of your sister by shattewing her fwagile wittle perception of reawity. Evil for all the right reasons.
And it just occurred to me that this is more of a chess game than I first realized, as they've both picked their queens... who are probably going to remain entirely unaware that they've been set against each-other. This is going to be HILARIOUS!
Bouncing against the bed, tablet in hand, Greenfang Everlasting slowly pleasures himself, wishing he had the right to be the one and only, Dark Apprentice.
So, this story isn't dead... good I'm happy to see an update, this is one of my favorite Luna fics that I have yet to finish. I would love to see more frequent updates... please?
The only time I've experienced a dead fic returning from the dead, was with Sharing the Night. Last update was June, then it updated 25th of December :3
Yes! YOUR NOT DEAD! Good update. Hope to see more soon!
2115231 did you just try and do a ?
2115685
Do or do not, there is no try.
Now you've peeked my other interest... Someone tryign to kill morals (or enjoys breaking them) I look forward to one or both of the wonderful looking cakes at the table. I can only wish you luck.
Update finally. Hope this is the start of more frequent updates.
Hmmm wonder what kind of diversionary trouble The Princess of Love can get into?
best three words in the entire chapter!
Well, this should be interesting. I wonder just what she has in mind?
On a somewhat related note, the whole "not quite an expression" thing got kinda repetitive near the end. You might want to adjust that to say something else for one of them.
For such a short chapter, this was a very nicely written one.
Good update, had almost forgot about this. Glad I didn't.