Although the play was a success, Luna was very unhappy after she and Celestia returned to the Castle. Celestia doesn't understand why her little sister is acting like such a foal, but Luna is about to give her sister piece of her mind as to why she is so frustrated.
Note that this one piece takes place shortly after the events of the MLP episode "Horse Play". If you have not seen the episode by this time, well, I suggest watching that episode first. Will help make more sense of this story.
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A few seconds of sunlight ≠ An eternal night.
Celestia did what she had to do.
They have seen worse without panicking.
They were in the middle of a play.
THERE WAS NO TIME.
The ending was weird.
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Major word that comes into play. Fanfiction. It's not canon, so whatever the writers were thinking in their head at the time of making the episode "Horse Play", has nothing to do with me creating a story just for entertainment purposes.
And I don't see why using the Royal Canterlot voice is so wrong for the story.
We've also seen the two sisters argue over less important things. Remember Slice of Life?
With that video you referred to, yes, they didn't think to panic, and most likely thought the princesses were drunk again. But also remember the episode "Princess Twilight", when the sun and moon appeared in the sky together, how everyone was freaking out and searching for answers. And we aren't even sure how the rest of Equestria was reacting when Discord got set loose the first time.
And yes, I get it, it was a play. Yes I get it, they had no time. But remember how Luna's expression looked when Celestia raised the sun. That spawned this idea in my head.
And my ending to the chapter. Can you blame me for trying to be creative? If they put out material like what was in the movie, you bet I will use that in whatever way I can to my advantage.
All in all, I do appreciate that you spoke what was on your mind. I am sorry the story wasn't to your liking, but it was an idea I just felt I should write. I know I can't please everyone.
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Tia and Luna learned their lesson in that episode. And even then they knew better than shouting at each other in front of their guards.
Equestria has seen much worse than a few moments of sunlight at night.
If it started to rain chocolate and houses were flying around it would be a reason to worry.
She would make some snippy remarks at worst and would realize that her sister could have done nothing else in this situation.
They still love each other dearly.
This would be a funny idea.
I have certainly no problem with creativity.
But you ended your story as soon as it actually got really interesting.
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What can I say, I like cliffhangers from time to time.
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Sorry, when the words are actual words, sometime I miss those little bits and pieces. Again, sorry.
Strange ending, awesome story!
Wonder what was the relic that the pirates found in the end?
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It's more fun to keep the readers guessing on a cliffhanger.
I wonder what they found.
This really feels like a chapter one. Where's the rest of it?
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Would there be a story touching on that?