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Matthais Unidostres


I am Matthais Unidostres, I'm a Christian and I love FanFiction!

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After spreading the world of the Storm King's demise, Tempest Shadow feels it is time to further atone for her role in his attrocities by leading an attack on Klugetown to liberate the slaves being imprisioned and sold there. After a rousing speech to convince Equestria's Royal Guard, and an appeal to Queen Novo's desire to make up for years and years of cowering in Seaquestria, an army of ponies and hippogriffs is ready to shatter Verko's hold on the town. With Tempest Shadow, Princess Twilight Sparkle, Spike, Starlight Glimmer, and the other five Element Bearers leading the charge, victory is all but assured.

What's more, two of the brave creatures among this army are about to have meetings that will significantly alter the course of their lives.

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Comments ( 14 )

Whoa, already a few chapters in & it has been quite bloody so far! :fluttershyouch:

The fights here for freedom have been hectic, with Capper at the top so far! Glad it had a good resolution to it! Also it's cool that you got Spike in the thick of it during the fight as well, the little guy has proven that he can step up alongside the best of them when things get serious. (I still love that combo he did with Rarity against Chrissy in the series finale :pinkiehappy:)

Looking forward to see what the next chapter brings! :twilightsmile:

Ooookay that revelation with AJ just blindsided me out of nowhere, I mean what the hay?????? :pinkiegasp:

Let's see how this ends! :applejackunsure:

Well they kept what happend the the Apple parents vague enough. I do feel the story needs a bit more detail, and the first chapter is kind of short but so far it's pretty interesting.

They made AJ’s parents slaves? Oh, Klugetown, you’re going to pay. With blood. Lots of it

oh hey the only other story on this site which comes up if you search for "Verko"!

It's always good to see unfinished business taken care of. Well done.

Quite the conclusion for both Verko & this story, well played! :raritywink:

Looking forward to see what the sequel to this one brings, for a certain country pony that is! :ajsmug:

Gave this story a look after TCC56 mentioned it in Broken Stems, and I have to say I enjoyed it quite a lot. Looking forward to the sequel!
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Ah the typo faster than a roadrunner more wiley than a coyote. Able to appear between the the push of the publish button and the appearance on the screen. Good story sequel looking good to.
However, as the battle ranged on below [raged ] ?
Verko swiftly shuddered the window, [shuttered ]

Nice Treasure Island reference with Pinkie there.

"I just wanted to know," Pinkie Pie said, still smiling at him, "Are ya more ugly than you are evil, or are ya more evil than you are ugly?"

Dorf snarled as he swung his whip back, and he said, "I'll slice your face in half!"

Pinkie nodded and said, "Uh-huh! I'm sure ya will, but before you do, I have one more question." She then held up a metal ring with keys hanging on it and asked, "Are these yours?"

Dorf's eyes widened, and looked down at his belt to see that his keys had indeed been stolen. He looked back up at Pinkie, only instead to see the inside of her Party Canon.

Treasure Planet reference! :pinkiehappy:

She needs to point out that their are ponies there too.

I was fine with the reunion. If anything I'd say they are doing mighty well and a bit on the chatty side considering how long they would have been there.

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