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TheOneWithoutAName


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Christ people. I doubt 99 % of the current thumbs have even read the story.

It should be forbidden by rules to thumb content that you have not read.

What exactly is a warbeast? I mean, what do they like?

I like stories like this. It has all the fetishy content I enjoy, but without the crushing despair and my favourite characters being miserable. Nicely done.

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I just find it sad that people really get angry enough to downvote a story because of the subject.

It would be no different than me downvoting every crossover-story because stupid personal reasons.

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There are not many pictures. On derpibooru you can type in "Fall of Equestria" and "War Beast" and will find three results, from which two are Fall of Equestria warbeasts. Anyway, one of the pictures was used as a title cover. It shows a warbeast in the background as a silhouette that is breathing fire:

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/211341/fall-of-equestria-suns-setting

The other existing pic is more warbeast focused if you want to look it up.


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It is sad that a show that is about friendship and love and tolerance has such haters as fans. I can agree on that. I don't have to understand it, but I have read it countless times before. One has even said that one should be expected to be judged for interests like this. Sad thing is that a discussion won't solve this problem, so I would say to best stop it here. No need to get heated over something we have no control over. :ajsleepy:

Only problem I really have is that this makes it hard for me to judge if the story is a good one or a bad one. I have gotten positive feedback from my Prereader, but I would still love to hear of course if you guys think it is a worthy successor to the prequel or not. Kinda an important use of this comment section after all. It is also my best way to judge if the story turned out well or not. :pinkiesmile:

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Though for some reason Fall of Equestria group isn't excepting anything.

Comment posted by fanreader999999 deleted Mar 29th, 2019
ZAKARI #9 · Feb 1st, 2018 · · 1 ·

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Maybe YOU should be tolerant of people who want to blindly shit on you before expecting other people to be tolerant.

How is he not doing exactly that. The author hasn't blocked people or deleted comments, merely that he wished people wouldn't immediately downvote because of content. He IS tolerating people. Perhaps you should get your eyes checked.

Comment posted by fanreader999999 deleted Mar 29th, 2019

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Well, at least your making it obvious that you're intentionally trying to be as obnoxious as possible.

I don't see how this is too bad. It's extremely kinky, sexy, and VERY erotic. Is it that the story is poorly written and many spelling errors are spotted? That wouldn't makes sense because from what I've read of TOWAN, they're normally very well made.

Also, isn't eventual consensual rape really questionable consent?

krrst #13 · Feb 1st, 2018 · · 1 ·

Overall, I thought it was pretty decent. In not particularly fond of Gilda but I still found enjoyment from the scenes. I much prefer a pony than griffons to be honest.

I know the story hasn't been through editing but it really needs it. The flow of scenes can be really rough when the tense is changing so much. Is the story being told in a past tense out is it happening right now?

I enjoyed the sex scenes however and I think you captured the depravity quite well. Gotta love a little war beast action!

Anyway, good job, and you get a thumbs up from me!

It's an okay continuation of the previous story. I appreciate the attempt of creating a story despite being in Fall of Equestria. That universe is meant to be a silly fetish clop story which story is as well.

I also like the nice jab at FOE and its ridiculous overpowered takeover.

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Depends on your view on things. I use things like Dubious Consent too, but for different things. For stuff like 'not outright rape'.

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Past tense. But for such things I have my Editor. I hope things are better now. Also, glad you enjoyed it! :yay:

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I am glad you like it! :twilightsmile: Said mentioned jab was actually meant in an observatory sense. A simple 'What happened?' or 'How did things turn out like this?' moment. A few musings here and there as well with the one-hit-weapon. I found it interesting to have a character actually think about this world take over. It is something extremely drastic after all.

Definitely not a bad story, I loved it very much! I especially love when Gilda finally realized this was exactly how it was meant to be. Now that was just a great payoff to their comeptition!

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I enjoy some good dubious consent every now and then.

I didn't know I needed this.

(I haven't read it yet.)

I do think that Rainbow would compete with Gilda. It's just her nature.

Noah, get the shotgun.
Noah : "not enough buddy"
Then get the exterminatus button.

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