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That was one of the best reads of my life, and it hit literally everything I could have possibly asked for in a fic. Thank you so so much! :yay:

Isn't "Abigail" a human name?

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Yeah it is, I specifically asked that LewdChapter use that name.

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I also suck at pony names, so we're just gonna pretend that Abigail is a normal name in Equestria.

Honestly? I'm not sure what to think. I may be biased, since I rarely read any sort of clop, but here's why. When clop just exists to be porn, it just seems a little too much. That's what this feels like. But if I'm going to look at this, just as a story, not as whether or not I like the concept, OOC twilight made no sense. I always imagined Twilight being a clean-minded virgin, not like... this. I understand that this is the point, that seeing this from Twilight gives shock value, but, at the very least, Rarity, Celestia, hell, even Luna or Applejack would have made a little bit more sense. I understand that this is a porn fic, but this is basically my view on porn fics, Porn fics should be porn fics, not porn.

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well there's a lot more to this story then what is actually written in it behind the scenes as it were.

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And Mr lewdchapter, enjoy your new OC, because I can tell you, you really did make it really really suffer and still is

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Yeah, cool and all, everyone is entitled to their opinion, but porn for the sake of porn is kinda my schtick. I am entirely aware that Twilight is ooc, and, frankly, I don't really care who you think makes more sense, because I did exactly what I set out to do exactly for who I set out to do it for.

Don't read porn if you don't like porn.

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Alright, fair enough.

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For the record, Madam, you really shouldn't leave a conversation with half the information.

I changed the name to avoid upsetting you. And, since you're not Abigail, I figured I may as well adopt her. None of this was done to spite you. Come back and talk about things instead of running off in a huff, and I promise you'll feel a whole lot better about things.

Yay! I'm so happy I'm not into this I could cry.

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you know very well I have no objection to this story and that I was even looking forward to it

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I pity anyone who's too square to enjoy a fic like this.

What will happen when she grows up and gets the upper hoof for once?

Comment posted by K-O-D-E-X deleted Apr 22nd, 2018

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The Abyss went and poked my nose. Thank god for that, I was worried I was too jaded to feel such a reaction.

Also, calm your tits. If you didn't expect such a visceral reaction, you ought've kept it unpublished. In fact, I would say the reaction you got is about the perfect reaction to this. All the other really vicious stuff I've pretty much shrugged off because the vast majority is terrible or so exagerated that it becomes farce. This WASN'T. So step back and be super happy the one person you wrote this for was super happy about it and ignore the peanut gallery. And if the peanut gallery is horrified, that's their issue.

Eh... I liked Scrambled Egghead, but this was sub-par, it's not terrible mind you but it's not that great, for being porn for the sake of porn there is so little of it.

Hell if well written there are snuff fics I don't mind if but this "breaking in" was ehh at best.

(I would recommend reading Alicorn Milk foal-con but at the same time not having to go the dark cliche tag that usually follows most foal-con fics.)

It was good enough for a quick read and an eyebrow raise but not much else.

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I'm guessing they don't have jokes in your neck of the woods...

Was just a gag, kid.

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Cool.

I won't read the think you suggested, but cool.

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TIL that The Abyss is still around.

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I'm guessing you don't have people who actually think their tastes in porn make them superior in your neck of the woods.

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Frankly, no. I didn't realize that what I said could be construed as anything other than a joke.

Learn something new every day, eh?

Edgy

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Aww. Feel bad for her tbh.

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Abby's happy with her life. Even if she doesn't know that she shouldn't be

As someone who rarely reads foalcon I found this to be fine. Some scenes were brutal and the clop was average.

Couldn't help but laugh at the boop. Then feel bad for laughing given the rest of the story:ajsleepy:

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Glad someone other than me found it funny

Comment posted by Cerilex deleted May 1st, 2018

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Much like Thomas, you're coming in half-cocked and with no information, and it makes you look silly.

Absentia does not own the name, likeness, or concept of the filly Abigail. Literally, the only thing that she contributed to this character is the idea of Twilight owning a filly (which is an idea that she didn't come up with at all) and the name which I didn't end up using anyway. Furthermore, if you would've done some research or asked around before you came around trying to start trouble, you would know that Abs gave me permission to use this character for this story. Permission I didn't need anyway because, as I've pointed out ad nauseam to both you and her, she doesn't own this character.

I appreciate what you're trying to do, I really do. But you're letting your, frankly irrational, anger with me get in the way of you and common sense. Seriously, think about the situation for a second. How does giving me a name that I didn't use anyway for a character that she didn't design in a story she didn't conceive give her copyright for the character?

And, to clear up the inevitable confusion of any readers of this comment will have, this is a personal matter that probably should've been conducted via PMs.

Comment posted by Cerilex deleted May 1st, 2018

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This further confirms that you don't know what you're talking about.

This isn't a likeness of Abs. It's a character with a vaguely similar name. It's not based in Abs. At all. In any way, shape, or form. If you can point out how I supposedly based this character off of Abs, I'll delete the whole, surrender the rights to the character, and eat my fucking hat live on stream.

I asked Hoovy because it's his story, not Abs.

Just changing a name doesn't change the copyright for material, the same applies to OCs.

This is you explicitly mentioning copyright.

If you wanna call me a dick, so fucking be it. I'm tired of dealing with your bullshit. You got a problem with me, say it to my face rather than stirring up trouble in my comments. That's a dick move, since you seem confused by such concepts.

Comment posted by Cerilex deleted May 1st, 2018

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Hey Tomes, Abs didnt make that OC. It was me and Stardust. Also abs says shes okay with this story, mainly cause it has nothing to do with her. She helped come up with the idea, even.
I think you should seperate the real life person abs, from the OC cartoon horse that isnt in anyway related to her. Please leave mr Lewd alone.

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I wrote out a whole long, mean, angry, shouty comment here before deleting cause I realized that you have successfully sapped me of the ability to give a shit. If you want to continue to harass me and threaten me with RWBY memes, then so be it. I tried to make things right with you. I tried to get in contact so we can hash things out like adults. You refused. So, as far as I'm concerned, I've done everything that was required of me. Perhaps even more.

This will not be the last Abigail story. I was on the fence about whether I would actually do something with her, but this pretty much makes my decision for me. I wrote 9,583 words of this story, of this character. I gave her a look, a personality, a story, and a name. As far as I'm concerned, she's mine. If you've got a problem with that, I suggest you take it up with someone with the power to make me give a fuck. Lemme know when you find someone like that.

This will be the last time I ever respond to anything you say to me. So if you wanna leak out my private information or do anything else that would make me rue the day I crossed you, then do it. I don't care. I'm tired of dealing with you and I won't do it anymore.

Goodbye forever.

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We've talked about this arcane, do you know how uncomfortable this is for me, especially now it is in a public place, this really should have been in a DM If you had to say anything at all

This story is getting way too much hate for what it really is. If you're just here browsing for medium quality whacking material, pardon the pun, you can beat it. This is exactly what it says on the tin, and it delivers quite well on the premises that it set out. It's a mind break fic, it reads well and it explores uncomfortable relationships. If you can't handle that, you don't get an award for being a good two shoes who strapped on their Sunday best and played missionary of fimfic. If you aren't interested, don't click on it. End of story. Speaking of stories, this one was quite good, and I liked it. End of second story.

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Some people just dislike what they don't like, that's it, though I wouldn't say that people shouldn't read something simply because they aren't interesting. After all, don't judge a book by its cover...

Sometimes, you just need to read some story that throws morals out the window, and .this was one. Thank you for that

“Are you ready for you to make you mine, inside and out?”

First "you" should be "me".

I liked it, truthfully we need morre goal rape fics like this. Sex shouldn’t feel good to them.

Not too bad, as far as dark fics go. Although, I often find there's something missing from stories like these. Namely, a third party. If she's walking around freely in only chains, then surely others must have seen her. What do Twilight's friends or Spike think of this? Are they impressed, indifferent, mortified? It'd be nice to see the world expanded just a little more.

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That's what the later Abby stories are for.

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So sequels are due?

great story! I eagerly await the next instalment of what happens to appy

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