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TheOneWithoutAName


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woohoo could there be a sequal

Hey, a new story from you! I always loved your fics, so this was a treat. :twilightsmile:

Though still some sliver of guilt nagged at her, seeing as she was the one fostering these thoughts in her children as she really wanted to see them go against her friends. Of course not out of malice. She wanted her friends to become just like her. A turned-demoness. After all demons and ponies couldn’t be friends, so having them become demons would solve that problem splendidly.

Now I can totally imagine a completely serious sequel where Twilight becomes the ambassador to demonkind and help demons become friends with ponies in a slow, but completely bloodless "takeover" with Celestia absolutely unable to do anything due to ponies willingly be with their demon friends.

Another awesome story. Thanks Towan.

are you going to make a sequel?!

Contains: Rape Towan Style

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nice work.

Trying to go about my day comfortably, but then this just had to come along. Now I have to decide whether to read it or not! Damn you conscience! :raritydespair:

What is rape towan style? I cant find it anywhere

I feel evil saying this but i hope there is a sequel to this i'm curious to see how this truly ends for Celestia and her friends

If a sequel is made I hope that both those two demon's are killed in the end and Twilight's soul is made pure once more.

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Rape Towan Style is just a placeholder for Eventual Consensual Rape. I had enough discussions about that term, so I use a placeholder now to avoid any and all discussions about the validity of that term. :twilightsheepish:

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Oh. Considering the lack of it in the description, might I introduce you to the "mind break" and "corruption" tags? Not wanting to start that discussion again you mentioned, but just a fyi.

Also, that feature. Dammit people. :facehoof:

I mean, not that it isn't written well (I tried to make sure of that), but it's still a hard rape fic first and foremost...
Or, I might be falling into the pit of equaling likes with people enjoying the tags rather than the quality of the story.
Ponders

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Are you doing any commissions or anything

Is it bad I want to see this continued? Great job on the story.

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The one who Commissioned this was thinking of a Sequel to this as possible. Either that, or the Gleaming Shield with King Metamorphosis sequel clopfic. Buuut that is something to be decided in November. I wrote quite a few stories for him, so a break is a good thing, so I can focus on other Commissions and Stories for now.

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This is more of a dark side wins like scenario, so it is something I can't really offer you. :ajsleepy:

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Will add a Corruption tag then. :pinkiesmile: Also that Feature was only for a small amount ot time. But that isn't surprising as not many would go for a hard rape fic.

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Nothing bad with wanting to see that. It is all in good fun. :yay:

You are a sick man.

And I love that.

Her eyes travelled left and right, seeing a guard in dark armor flanking her from both sides. As protection. Tempest, her guard captain, pretty much demanded this safety for her if she was to come with them into the cultists (apostrophe) lair and save the kidnapped mare.

Twilight instantly avoided (averted) her eyes.

The demon laughed, “You asked for it girl. You didn’t protest as I told you that I will give you your mentors (apostrophe) punishment. Or was it mother? I imagine after all that she was a mother figure to you. And yet she abandoned you. Always pushed you to fight her fights. And for what? To teach you a valuable lesson? Or was it rather her own selfishness that made her throw you at all her past adversaries like a mere tool? Do you still want to serve her? Do you still want to take your dear mother’s punishments and be damned to stay in Tartarus for all eternity? Hm?” he asked all too mockingly, as he was breaking the mare’s trust in Celestia.

“That is enough for now. Retreat from (to) the pits you came....(from),”..... his booming voice commanded. The tentacles shivered slightly and did as they were told, slowly slinking back through the portal.

Of course her thoughts first went to Nightlight, her biological father, and as Felgrand turned her backside to him, she couldn’t help but imagine what it would be like to be bend (bent) over by her own father and used by him like she was now.

Just as he said that the grip of his magic on the sensitive areas of her wings, horn, nipples and clit tightened, making the mare trash (thrash) around at the spike of pleasure and pain she clearly felt. Then Jophiel pushed further, letting his magical aura travel all over her body, making it cribble with many sensations and teasing the mare as he played with her.

I would so love to see a sequel to this... Show how they escape, how they go to the world of ponies and how they corrupt the main six along with other mares....

She was pregnant. A black perverted symbol instantly was etched above her cunt. It looked like a heart-formed canal and womb along with the oviduct. It looked like a perverted tattoo and had certainly a sharpness to it as well with its edges.

Almost forgot, but I hope you have more things featuring this; that was hot.

I agree with everyone here that I want a sequal but that is up to you and the person who commissioned this

Is this story in the same universe with your old work "A Gleaming Turnabout" ?
I think it will be more interesting if both of your works are in the same universe.:twilightsmile:

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They are not. And while it could be interesting I think it might work out more to have them separated and the focus on each 'villain' here, so to speak. Both of the antagonists here have their own goals and having one another interfering could take away from the action between the antagonists and their respective protagonists.

Would you mind writing one more chapter of this story?:ajsmug:
I really want to read one more chapter about
"How Felgrand impregnated Twilight two more times after Twilight gave birth to Maalik.".:twilightblush:

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It doesn't sound quite that exciting to me as the main event is the first impregnation and her corruption. Not to mention that this was a Commission as well and it is already wrapped up. Well, there is still a possible sequel of it in the future.

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I really want to read the detail of "How Felgrand use Twilight as his breeding stock for his children" and "How Twilight raise the trio in two years" in your story, so I feel sad to know that you don't interested to write it.:fluttershysad:

I hope you will mention or put a flashback of the trio about "How Twilight raise the trio in two years" in the sequel of this story.:unsuresweetie:

Thank you for you reply my question anyway.:pinkiesmile:

I need a sequel for this so badly.

What would happened if Spike plant mate marks on.....

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Unless it's where yes she get's purified but not completely as she still remains a demon in body and for the most part in spirit and if she is able to stay in Equestria she has to hide said traits to avoid fear maybe hate as well and if she returns to Tartarus she'll go back to being fully corrupted except in mind and if she isn't able to stay in Equestria well at least she won't have the same mindset as she did when she tried to take over Equestria when she's fully corrupted again except in mind and is unable to be with her friends except for using certain spells or if she's summoned or they're only able to revert her in mind but not her body and spirit or revert her in mind and body but not in spirit.

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If she gets purified or not is pretty much the choice of the one who is Commissioning it. And from what I know, purifying her is no option here. This is a Corruption Clopfic, so its main plot line is about the bad guys winning. Pretty much like the fic where a gender-swapped Chrysalis dominates Gleaming Shield. It just is not meant to have a good guys winning ending. Of course depending on the situation and topic this doesn't have to be a necessarily dark topic either. Of course here it is more so with the obvious rape. But even some dark topics aren't necessarily a bad thing and can be rather interesting too! :pinkiesmile:

Is a sequel of this story canceled?:rainbowderp:

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More like it really depends on when the Commissioner wants said Sequel. So it can take some time. :pinkiesmile:

As he finished saying that his teeth snapped forward, sinking into her soul. Twilight’s eyes widened, and her brain exploded with a huge wave of ecstasy. It was wracking her body, making her convulse as the last of her innocence was torn straight from her, leaving only a corrupted dripping mess of a soul behind.

Reading this again, I just realized this means it's technically hard soul vore. I don't think I ever encountered something like that before (there's soul digestion fics, but not "chomping on soul and making it drip "soul blood""). Nice work for being unique! I hope this occurs again if you ever write about corruption in the future. :twilightsmile:

I was not expecting the soul devouring thing, and I was not expecting it to be as hot as it was. Good job!

Comment posted by theBatmantyler deleted Oct 16th, 2020

“Right about time. I have had enough of this place,” Sunset agreed quickly walking towards the stairs of the cave.

Edit 12/7/2020:

Two years passed.

Edit 12/8/2020:

Your daddy will have to fuck you in front of your mother to break morale after all~”

What are they gonna do about the males though?

I orgasmed three times while reading this.

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Yes I stopped reading every time I orgasmed then continued the next day.

Jesus!! This is such a good ass fanfic. Will there ever be a sequel? ::”)? How much r ur commissions ?

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Look on my main page and scroll down. I think I am at $ 20 per 1,000 words. Gotta get some dough to finance my games. :twilightsheepish:

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