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Majin Syeekoh
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Majin Syeekoh
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I love that spoiler
5149008 Thnx.
It came to me in a dream.
Twilight should hide it inside of something (If you know what I mean wink wink)
5149027 Indeed she should
How to write spoiler tags: Syeekoh edition.
Best edition is best.
5149049 Yes.
Indeed it is.
5149008
5149049
See, 5149059 ? Told you it was a great idea.
5149157 I see that now.
10/10 would recommend!
5149203 Thanks a bunch!
I call BS on that. Poor Apple Bloom.
That was, um, an interesting read.
This is indeed accurately tagged [Dark], and it is not foalcon. The quality of the writing is detailed and the pacing, characterization, and so on are well-done too. The subject matter is a pretty big turn-off though. I can see how many would enjoy this if their fetishes lie in that direction. Most people should heed the spoiler and simply not read this.
5149219
Thanks, I guess.
5149225
Well, it is tagged Dark...
And thank you for your compliments!
That trigger warning though! Yeah you're getting a read at least for that. Assuming you're not hiding something particularly... distasteful.
So thats why nightmare night happened
5149282 wat
5149284
has hate for cwlestia+views other beings not uni as inf+ weird drive and goal(also possible 1000 blue ballong)= nightmare moon :3 kinda like what twI was ; 3
5149298 I'll take your word for it.
*sees title*
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5149327 I find your response highly amusing.
As much as I find this fic enticing, I think you might want to use your slight of hand and remove them off of poniverse before the damn admin of the group finds it
it's sort of restricted to teen.
anyway, now that I got that out of the way, to the fic!
5149368 oh. I did not know that.
Thanks for the heads up!
5149373 absolutely no problem
Alright here I go...
first with the stats (from 1 to 10)
Enjoyment: 9
Grammar: 10
Word Choice: 11
Squick Factor (based on normality): 9001
Now I'll put it into my opinion.
Twilight x Applebloom. If there was a ship I didn't expect, I would say this is it. Not only that but you pulled it the fuck off! You actually pulled this off! The word choice was phenomenal with little to no errors that were not intentionally inserted, and overall, I just love it. It was the best use of my time all day. Thank you.
Here's a metric fuck load of love from your friendly pony in a three foot tall top hat,
5149410 ...thank you for your glowing review.
I'm glad that I made your day.
I have to ask... what word choice brought it up to 11?
5149431 I guess I used the wrong phrase. Perhaps I meant dialect? yeah, dialect
5149437 Ah. I see.
Well, I never saw this as a shipfic. It was just a story I really wanted to write that included raw, animalistic sex.
5149474 I never said it was a shipfic
I simply said I've never seen this ship pulled off like this before 
5149477 Oh.
How exactly do you mean, "never pulled off like this before"?
Sorry for the twenty questions, but I'm really interested in your answer.
5149484 To start, not a problem! I love questions, unless it's the same one repeatedly. anyway.
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If there is a fic like this using this kind of ship (as I'm referring to your animalistic sex) it usually becomes very lacking and fails. But if someone writes it well, usually the squick is so heavy in it, it flunks out. This was rather well balanced.
5149522 Hunh.
Thanks.
I just thought it was hot, but you've put it rather succinctly.
5149535
anymore questions you should refer to smash mouth
5149539 alright.
5149541
you're someone I like, I'll definitely be keep tabs on you.
Just the one chapter? That's too bad. After calling Celestia a whore I would've loved to see a chapter featuring the two.
5149579 Sorry. That's it.
Although you have planted the idea for a sequel in my brain.
Twilight grows a Dick? Not the most original thing in the world but this one is definatly rougher than the other stories I've read. Also, I know it wasn't intended but the way Applebllom talked made me chuckle.
Honestly, the only reason I'm gonna read this is because of the trigger warning.
Well, after reading this fic, I think that I can safely say that I'm not the only person to go in blind. Right Twilight?
Twilight Sparkle: ☜(ﾟヮﾟ☜)
Me: (☞ﾟヮﾟ)☞
Apple Bloom: ☜(⌒▽⌒)☞
5149612
Thank you. I will take that as a compliment.
5149622
You gotta find out, dont'cha?
5149670
Indeed you are not.
5149622 same here
5149695 Well, that was implied by the title and both descriptions.
5149699 Yus.
5149700
If you think I was mad when I posted that, then you clearly missed the pun and/or aren't familiar with my work.
5149713 No, I saw the pun and I've heard your name around before.
I think my brain's just asleep.
5149721
Gotta love how text-based communication works (or doesn't work) sometimes.
>tfw people downvote my comment because they think I'm being snarky.
5149683
I can't just read a trigger warning like that and not find out.
It also may have hit one or two of my fetishes. Glad I read that.
Mother fucker.
5149799
Yeah, text-based communication can be a bitch sometimes.
5149810
Glad to hear I tickled your fancy!