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SneakThief


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Heh, futa sex for comedy. I liked it. Absurd enough that we never ask rational questions. I was chuckling the whole time. Though, if you want to arouse, you should take a bit more time and go into more detail for the sex. But if you're just aiming to amuse, then you did a good job. :ajsmug:

OK, WHAT THE FUCK?!? XD
HAHAHAAA

Oh joy, yet another one of these goddamn futa alicorn fics. Not like the idea was already done to death and dashed against the ground anyways.

Indent or separate your paragraphs, plz

PR
PR #5 · Jan 14th, 2015 · · ·

5503829 Get out of here, the world can never have enough futa alicorn fics.

5503829
i.imgur.com/Pc6Nj1E.gif

Seriously though, I can understand where you're coming from but going onto what appears to be someone's first story and basically saying "not more of this shite" is kinda rude.

Grammars nice btw author, pacing and characterization could use some work if this isn't meant to be a comedy instead of a clop with some funny in it.

5505042 What does the "k" mean?

please please please have twilight tell celestia to fuck off and get her own harem! her friends can politely decline, and then twilight get's all protective over her new fuck friends.

PR

5506220 K, as in, OK.

5504414 Oops not sure how that happened, it was all indented in the GDoc. I've fixed it.

5506237
fuck buddies*

5506220

What PR said. Its basically a humorous way to acknowledge someones opinion, typically an unpopular one, without starting anything.

Welp this should have a sequel..... With the other princesses. :rainbowwild: :twilightblush:

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

Sequel. Now. with Luna and celestia and cadence. Go forth by the power lotus!

5504426 agreed. All in favour of this movement raise you hand hoof etc.

Sequel
Ultimate princess poundage on ponyvilles premier ponies plots. :trollestia:

Sequel please. :fluttercry:

5548303 :ajbemused: Why not just another chapter?Its easier to find that way.

5506237 Pony Princest Wincest Is Best, all I gotta say.

good stuff.

5507017
Sequel please. All the Princesses must plow all the Mane Six.

There were no survivors.

The best ending to a fic I ever read.

Girls, two words.

Run.

*gets a head-start on the aforementioned running while they wait for the second word.*

5503829 COULD YOU BE ANY MORE INSULTINGLY IDIOTIC.
IF SO, GO DO IT SOMEWHERE ELSE. WHICH DOES NOT MEAN ANYONES USER PAGE. OR STORIES.

The ending makes me want a sequel so badly! Granted there were some grammar errors, but those are easily fixed. While the idea of "all alicorns are hermaphrodites" is somewhat old now, it's still a lovely idea and others should explore and make use of it. Good job, adding this to favorites.

5507017
No, you didn't.

5507500
I agree with BronyMan's comment.

I kinda want to see the resulting orgy...

I was hoping that Spike would get a turn.

Oh dear...

This was pretty nice. You jump straight into the part we're all here for and, as Jake said, make it absurd enough that we don't feel like asking rational questions.

U suckers and your he/she's fetish.

This is a really good story. Are you going to make a sequel? You can go a lot further with what you have here and I hope you do.

5507017
I want to read a sequel to this story please

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