Gaze within the Holocron and see what stories it has to tell.
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Love it.
Let's play "Downvote the Degenerate."
Nothing really happened
Shrug
Next challenge is to write a story in 1000 words and not 1000 words trying to be a story.
While I enjoyed it - and would never say one has to write more than 1k words if you don't waste them - this seems more like a build up than an actual story. I would suggest going into detail for the sex.
will there be part 3?
I wanted to like both of these stories, but I sadly can't. The first one was almost there, just rushed to hell. I've always disliked word-restriction challenges like that. Most stories are going to need more than 1k words to get across the scene that you're trying to paint. Take this story, for instance. Basically nothing happens. It's a good concept that I'm very into, but I can't help but feel cock-teased (and not even in the fun way)
We need a sequel but maybe with more than 1000 words
Still need a one were zebras get their punishment