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Shouldn't that be "Twilight Sparkle's new babysitter?"
This has Shakespearicles written all over it.
Thank you concordion for this sacred blessing.
She bends lower to check the lower shelf, wiggling her hips. Oh, Luna.
Hate to be that guy, but Luna would be in the moon at this point
This was amazing. I'd love to see more of it!
Why is this marked complete? Absolutely nothing has been resolved. There has to be some sort of resolution for there to be an ending, and there needs to be an ending for a story to be complete.
Why are they swearing by Luna?
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Whoops, good point. Did ponies forget about Luna during her banishment? I'll ninja-edit those promptly. Thanks!
I adored this story and would be very interested in a follow up. Great stuff!
I’m curious, is this from the same storyline as How to Love Your Princess? It seems like it could fit in fine with how you’ve depicted Twilight in that series.
You are so goddamned good at this kinky shit
That was amazing
Is this an origin story for the Twilight in the How to love your princess universe?
I wanted to post this to your profile but I can't so I'll just drop this here:
You have one of the most interesting writing styles I have ever had the pleasure of reading.
The somewhat dark and depressing under tones (Cadence's treatment of Shining and Twilight then going off to fuck their parents, Twilight's fucked up connection with the last sitter, even how Twilight is treated in your other stories) and yet how the characters feel and act throughout your stories have an air of content about them. I feel bad for Shining and for Twilight in this and your other ones but both of them end up 'ok' with their situations, in the sense that they find something beneficial in their situation. The situation doesn't better and yet there's always a sense of hope at the end of your stories. It leaves a bitter sweet after-taste that I enjoy reflecting on for days after reading.
And how you never really show everything that is going on, leaving a lot of moments obscure so the readers have to fill in the blanks ourselves, is an interesting writing choice that you make work.
Your stories are thought provoking, cast an 'interesting' light on how the ponies in your stories interact with each other, and hell even the clop is amazingly well written.
TL:DR Your an amazing, unique writer and I am always looking forward to your next stories.
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Thanks! I can think of no higher compliment than to be mentioned in the same sentence as one of the giants.
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It's not a prequel, no. But If you squint your eyes and look at it just so, you could probably pretend it is.
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Thanks! I'd love to write more of it.
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Thanks! I doubt there will be a follow-up, but we'll see.
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Thanks! I try so very hard.
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Thanks! Like, a lot. My goal will always be uncomfortable boners, so dark and depressing fits the bill. It's a reaction to the super colorful, saccharine sweetness of the actual show. That and I fucking love soft cuck. How terrible.
Thanks everyone for your praise and worship. Comments and faves sustain me. I'll do my best to keep writing and earning your praise, so long as you all keep clopping--or at least until I decide to do something with my life.
I must admit, by the end of this l felt like I'd just read a psychological horror story. Had the twisted sense of wrongness in my chest and everything. I dont think id be able to live with myself if my sister was put through what happend to twilight here and not noticed anything out of the ordinary. By the end I was just reading with the hope that shining would just tell them all to go to hell, but that wasn't the point of the story in the end. You are a talented writer, but I think I'll avoid these kinds of stories from now on.
I'm not so sure I like the story, and it boils down to "Everybody fucks".
Now, that may sound like a weird criticism of a clop story, but its an issue I have with a bunch of porn in general. Sex usually has some sort of consequence or connection in the real world, unless we're talking one-night stands and the like. And even then, there's some kind of build-up to it happening.
Here, and in a lot of other porn stories, sex is just something that goes down without worry for either consequence or reality. Twilight? Raped and starts liking it. Cadence? Enticed into sex almost immediately. Shining? Same. All those people Velvet and Starlight got with? Yep, no issues there, even the underage ones.
When everyone has sex, without issue or buildup or any real connection, the act itself feels forced and weak. Not to mention the whole "acting out of character" thing.
The writing itself is fine. The pacing works. But overall, I wasn't a fan.
After reading this I can't help but want more, i feel like there needs to be a continuation of the story and or more chapters about the cadence sex scenes
Well done! The ages felt a little wonky from my own head Canon, but once I'd adjusted to that this was a fantastically dirty story 👍
This was disgustingly delicious.
I am ok with that.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I feel so bad for Shinning and Twilight. Though it almost feels like their parents are intentionally antagonizing Shinning in order to force him to act. Like they're trying to push him to the breaking point until he finally snaps and fucks Cadance on the kitchen table in front of everybody. I'm probably reading too far into things, I don't know. It just feels really anticlimactic to think that his parents are purely just trying to cuck him.
I really like the ending, though. It feels like the beginning of a character arch where Shinning, through great emotional hardship and encouragement from his family... in their own way, pushes himself through his boundaries and insecurities to finally take Cadance for himself. Either way, the most uncomfortable thing about this entire story is the 'Complete' tag. That shit's killing me, man.
Lol whore cadance
That was great I'd like some more. Your writing style is uncommon and very good I'll peruse your other stories nkw
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Honestly, I'd like to see this continue. Seeing shining armor try and contend with the knowledge that the mare he loves is a plaything of the family, twilight's depravity and shining very reluctantly pushed to fill the void that carpenter left, and just where things go from here.
I'm left with just the right amount of intrigue and feeling uncomfortable, if that makes sense. Good work.
Give or take a thousand.
She was part of the empire before Queen Amore got shattered...
Even in the show Celestia announced them to be MARE AND COLT...
Relative to an immortal. Anyone is a colt.
I figure she wasn't cursed for full 1000 years but released sooner. Somehow. Like 990... And she . Like Luna. Spend some time restoring her body, looking a lot younger...
And where else to better catch up than in a school!? ... It's canon ;p
Can't argue with that
Flank. Plot ;)
This was good. Really good.
Definitely had more "story" to it compared to any single of the How To stories (which themselves still have way more story than most porn) as well.
I liked the first chapter. I think I got off during the teasing scene, but I don’t remember since it’s been a day or two since I read it.
I really liked the second chapter. I got off three or four times while reading it.
Then there was chapter three. It left me all kinds of conflicted. My erection was like a pogo stick, constantly up and down, as I was by turns aroused, saddened--by what Twilight was saying/doing--and horrified. Both by what Twilight was saying/doing and my intermittent arousal from what was hit-and-miss erotic for me.
EDIT-Forgot to mention, thumbs up for the first two chapters, and the good/almost great writing throughout, even if it got kinda disturbing/dark in the end.
This story was great! Had a lot of kinky things I love in it. Now just wondering if the parents would have fucked Shining...
I would love to see a version of this from Cadance P.O.V. After she left Shining room.
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With the current P.O.V. it's the only fic with a wing-boner being *heard* instead of seen. One of several details that makes it interesting.
God I loved this so much. My spouse and I swing, I was a sexual child like twilight, I've been a nanny to preteen and early teen boys. I identified with this scenerio far too much to be anything but enthralled by it completely. 10/10
One of the best stories I have ever read. 8/10
With this level of quality, I hope we will read plenty more stories from you.
The foalcon stuff is a bit worrying, but besides that all of the story, especially the Cadance scenes were all top notch.
I love this bit of characterization.
Five minutes ago she had never sucked a cock either, and all three of you seemed go really enjoy that.
Damn couldn't even wait for shining to leave the house 😂😂🤣