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concordion
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this was a fun read, I will be looking forward to the next chapter to this.
This was great, looking forward to part 2. Hope we get to see some of these fillies bonding further by fucking their dads.
That was great! I love the public sexually relaxed setting and the interactions between the fathers and their daughters was pretty cute. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
this was pretty good! why did you do research for this fic?
Why the hell did I like this so much. I'm going to hell.
Even hotter than the first chapter! Great job with this fic. I really like how you wrote Twilight and Night Light's interactions. Twilight getting embarrassed by a kiss on the forehead from her dad after just having gotten creamed by him in front of a room full of other ponies was a nice touch.
This was an amazing story I demand a sequel
Shame. No yoga for twilight.
Damn. The one line about how this ISN'T commonplace/socially accepted really disappointed me. The whole "sex is just a thing ponies do" aspect is one of my favorite parts of Equestrian "culture," canon or not.
I can just ignore it, but still; I genuinely would have preferred if that one line hadn't been there
Oh fuck, that was such a fun ride.
It also seems to be covered in a lot of jizz, my dude. I bet he spends the rest of the day just cleaning that thing.
Aw man, come on. You can't just tease us like that after a good story.
Thanks everyone for your kind and invigorating comments!
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Thanks! I hope the conclusion met your expectations.
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Apparently Beards and Braids courses are pretty common, and I had to learn what sort of lessons actually go on in a real world. I, for one, have never braided someone's hair before. And there was a surprising amount of insight to be gained even for something as simple as combing someone's hair. But never again will I google these things with my pants down.
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Gasp! You write such good porn and you like my stories? Oh my. Also, I've read your stories -- Apogee and Delta-V and Jet Stream, or Zala, even Shining Armor is a Goddamned Moron -- I'm not surprised Beards and Braids is up your alley.
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Thanks! I'm not sure I was able to keep a consistent character for Twilight and Night Light throughout, but if it works, it works!
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I did have extra chapters planned out, but no time to write them -- that and a sore back that demands I spend less time sitting and writing. Some parts I would've added:
- A lesson on styling a pony's tail, which requires a different position to get comfortable
- Swirltop's wife brings Candy Crush one day, instead, and she and her daughter both cuck Swirltop
- A final quiz day where the fathers swap daughters; Night Light would end up with French Press and show none of the passive submission that Jazz does
- Free Range and his wife have a screaming match right before the start, about how he keeps exposing their daughter to such perversions; she takes Star Child and Free Range is like, "Hey, dudes. So, like, major bummer. Star Child's gonna stay with her uncle for a while, so, like, I guess I need a volunteer for today's lesson." And then Twilight is like, "Oh! Me! Pick me!"
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Heh, yeah. But I gotta leave some things to your imagination.
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I hear you. I understand the appeal and the flavor of "everybody fucks" equestria. But there's gotta be some conflict and tension, and for the rest of the course Night Light is gonna be looking over his back, and worrying that his daughter is going to do something that exposes everything. Plus, it leaves the door open for a secret group of ponies that love their daughters more than is socially acceptable to form and meet and swap tales and maybe even sexual partners?
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Yeah, I can. Sorry.
To everyone else, thanks for reading, liking, and commenting. One day I'll make it to the featured box -- just you wait and see.
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I love your stuff... there's a raw passion to it, and a mare-mind-melting quality that I wish I saw in more clopfickers.
I really liked 'Sharing with the family' when the Sparkles are overpowering the hot little babysitter and eventually buck her. I liked it so much that I basically stole the idea for 'A Great and Powerful Babysitter', making that the entire focus of the fic.
Ouch, that actually hurt more than it probably should. I don't suppose you would reconsider?
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I understand, but that doesn't mean that that has to be where the conflict comes from.
Still, it was a great story, and I can honestly just pretend that one paragraph doesn't exist. I just wish there were more stories in the "no sex taboo" Equestria. Most of the ones I see tend to go too far the other way, and it's framed like sex is kind of shoehorned into everything, and you're Weird if you don't do it all the time.
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This is absolutely Twilight.
Also, I can’t help imagining Free Range with the voice of Tommy Chong.
I would love to see a sequel to this centered around that yoga class!
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Damn, that all sounds hot!