Fall of Equestria: A Mare's Hearth's Warming Tale

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The Great Derpsby #1 · Jan 30th, 2016 · 6 · 1 ·

Oh yes. I've been waiting for this.

And it's every bit as cringeworthy-in-a-delicous-way as I imagined! Especially liked the part where it dove right into the play within the play, like it did with the actual show episode. Plus, the characters look to have been done well as established, too.

Definitely a keeper for me.

Northgalus2002

Northgalus2002 #2 · Jan 30th, 2016 · 3 · 1 ·

This was an interesting twist on the MLP:FiM eppie "Hearts Warming Eve" telling it through the Fall of Equestria universe. And you nailed the characters in this one. Of the two black collars, Apple Jack is going along, most likely for her family, while Rainbow Dash is fighting every step of the way. While Sassy Saddles (kudos to including this fifth season character) is just trying to keep everything together, to keep Hoity Toity happy. While I personally prefer post-fall fics to the fall ones, this was a good entry.

BTW, did you know that when Hoity Toity appeared in the Season One eppie "Suited For Success", he was modeled after designer and Project Runway co-host Tim Gunn?