I swear these delays aren't intentional
This story is a sequel to How a Rainy Day and some Generosity made my day.
Word of advice, if you ever see a spell book online never buy it.
I know it sounds awesome and to some extent it is. However if you're anything like me it will only end badly for you.
For example I am currently a girl because of my sister and the book I gave her. Hopefully Sunset will be able to fix this because I think I'm going to lose it.
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Is this a crossover?
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Not intentionally, I just felt like putting the reference in.
I love that Doki Doki Literature Club reference.
Also, this could use a combover from a spellcheck. Just to refine it a little.
like the story, and the sequel
just a suggestion, I'd go back though this as i took notice of quite a few typos
(She'd also proven helpful when my can fell pregnant)
A Pregnant can? first time for everything I suppose *teases in good nature*
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Can you tell it was a bit of an ass to get this made so I could get on with what I actually wanted to do? (I feel like something is better than dithering forever)
(Also I fixed that Typo, it was hilarious but not helpful)
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I could tell you were having issues due to all of the other typos i spotted littered about, I just didn't think about posting them all (sorry for that). Still I have to wonder will his or rather Her parents return to meet their "new daughter" any time soon? *giggles*
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It will happen... But probably not soon, I want to do as much as I can with Glare on their own before I add them in. (That and I haven't figured out what their like and not thinking things through is how I end up with pink rabbits being a thing that happened)
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I see
Random question. If they gave Glare a girls name as part of a cover, what do you think they would call her?
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No idea, I thought Glare was fairly gender netrual to be honest (that's kinda why I picked it) But they probably would need one... erm... I'll think about it.
This would be a lot better if you had some sort of editing. Defiantly and definitely aren’t the same word.
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Whats the difference?
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Defiantly means to do something in rebellion. Definitely means something similar to for sure.
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Ah, yeah I'm seeing the problem now. In my defence... No I just couldn't see it, hang on.
something seems off with that part but I can't tell
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Thanks for letting me know, I have now fixed it
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welcome
ii think you mean how that girl does it
Yeah Sunset what is this Persona?
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Yes that's what i mean... URGH I am bad at this!
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A side effect of the fact that line was originally written for a different story where the protagonist was talking to twilight.
Still Sunset was at least somewhat studious and defiantly seams to enjoy being at CHS, so I figured it might work at a stretch... I'll be more careful in future.
poor sparky can't catch a break
Poor poor guy. I feel slightly sorry for him-turned-her
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If he could there wouldn't be a plot.
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i mean theirs being a plot then theirs having your couch try and eat you
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That is true, personally the Venus fly trap sounded worse to me.
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i raised a venus fly trap they are actoually very fragile litle things that plant probably died that night it was summoned to to to much water in the roots
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Imagine a giant one crawling out of your loo while you're on it, that's why I consider it to be worse.
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i can see that but I would imagine this guy would be used to seeing stuff like that by now
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That wouldn't make it pleasant, it just means you'd have a better idea on how to handle it.
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this guy needs to oh wait never mind not that type of story
At least it wasn't a spell that permanently fixes skimpy clothes to ones body.
Glare just "Force Punched" Zephyr...Neat, so.. Earth Pony Powers?
I have a question about Glare's transformation, It was a near instant (yet painful) switch from male to female, yeah?
Whouldn't the sudden change cause mental problems too? Due to shifts in hormone levels, and brain chemistry, etc?
Males and females are wired differently both mentally and physically.
Food for thought, no?
Also, cool pic of Blooming..
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Thanks, and yeah it probably would cause a lot of problems, thought it already had.
i ship it
as you should
Allow me.
https://m.Okay, I did not expect that. For that, you got a Bonus point.
No it's not. Its speciesist. There's a difference.
Yup I can see both Trixies being that way.
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💘 this story
What the fuck happened to her clothes
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Next chapter will explain why its happening but its in the early chapter (1 or 2 I forget which) for whats happening.
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I know the clothes are cursed but that seems a little extreme
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Glare/spark had a spell to reduce the effects on them and that's broken now
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Oh sweet nibblets
Oh well. Guess we’ll see how this goes. Nice chapter to.