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pjabrony


My name's PJ. I'm from New York. I write pony fics. I go to parties with bronies. I'm not good at self-introduction.

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IT FINALLY HAPPENED.

MY GOD I WASN'T READY.

"All right, little pony-to-be. I’ll ride you bareback.” This line deserves a medal.

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Thanks. I really enjoy your stories and so this means a lot to me.

"I’ve got everything I was, including a little part of you."

Why is this not setting off huge warning bells in your head, human? (And she said it was a 'safe day'; was she mistaken, or was she lying?) :trixieshiftright:

Okay, I'm sorry, I've got to put this out there: That mare looks like her legs are broken and she's in severe pain. Also, someone shaved her muzzle.

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You're so close. . . but you're way off.

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:scootangel: As good a writer I am, that's how bad I am artistically, even in the limited medium of Pony Creator art.

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Well, I look forward to seeing how that works. :twilightsheepish: I'm mainly surprised he didn't go 'wait what', though.

There needs to be more tcb clop, but a job well done.

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I know, right? Where are all the brony transformation fetishists? Personally, I'm a utopian fetishist. It turns me on to think about living in a perfect world.</tmi>

:rainbowlaugh: yes! i love it!!! please continue! oh..and first comment! yay!

Dat 'foreplay'... :rainbowhuh::ajbemused::unsuresweetie:
“Please don’t stop!” she cried.
Well, okay then. :twilightsmile:

First ever clop TCB... and I like it!

Over already?:rainbowderp:

But I wanted more!

I find the last chapter a bit too fast, but hey, it was the last one.

It might need a sequel... A juicy sequel :P

what no comment? how weird this chapter was good giving me ideas

well... THATS one way to enter equestria :rainbowlaugh:

its kinda sad having to put off dreams like that :fluttershysad:

Wow. Twilight Zone level justice. I am proud to have this be the first clop story in the TCB. Excellent job.

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Thank you. I try not to write clop-without-purpose. I also think that it's a sine qua non of TCB stories that the ending should be bittersweet.

This is actually the first TCB story I've read; I've been shying away from the subject of it, but I'll likely read more because of this. I really enjoyed this for the direction you took it and the excellent writing you applied to the story. I know it's a bit generic to say, but wow, very well done.

I am a bit surprised by the level of downvotes, which I'm guessing are TCB fans trying to keep clop out of the genre (or something like that). A shame, really. This story deserves a much less prejudiced evaluation (assuming I'm right).

Oh yeah, one more thing: Principality? How about Princessipality? And now, I will run away. :facehoof:

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I think rather that some of the downvotes are from people who just don't like The TCB at all. Or maybe people who didn't like the story. In any case, I'm glad you liked my story, and that you will read more. Though I'm sure you will find some that don't fit your views, I urge you to push past them.

4580420 Thanks for your response. I suppose I'll find out what you mean by not fitting my views, but conflict being the heart of a good story (usually), I don't think I'll have too much trouble.

I'm hopeful at finding some stories with depth and skill to them. If you have any recommendations to toss my way, I'd appreciate them.

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I like 27 Ounces and The Taste of Grass by Chatoyance; they're the most complete, but to a greater or lesser degree, there's some cringe-y criticisms of the universe and humanity.

Odd how many down votes there are, there really isn't anything that sticks out to us as "bad", at least not enough for a down vote.
Sleep came to experience change. Well, that's one radical change indeed!
I can't say I agree with his viewpoint that he would never gain feelings for Honeydew. If done right I'm sure they could build a very healthy and loving relationship,but the obsession over freedom has got to go as well as the intent to pretend.
Keep going! ;)

John Smith Isn't that a Doctor Who reference?

6190550 Can't be. I don't watch it.

6190550 yes, and no...
John Smith is also the most common name in the world. :twilightsmile:

My dick scraped along the ground. And I used to not be long. Now I looked between my legs and saw the three-foot monster I was now sporting.

I felt like I was even bigger, maybe four feet long.
I had to put it in. It felt like I was ready to burst with all the blood in my dick.

Gearing myself up for a fight, I kicked my back legs into the ground for support and bucked my hips against Honeydew’s. She responded to my aggression with moans of pleasure and clenched down on me. I came into her.
I had been coming every few hours or so with little release from the passion I had been feeling. I expected no less this time. I pulled out with a satisfying plop as ropes of fluid bridged between us. Then I turned to find the intruder.

I really want this 'Purple' stuff (:

find luna woo her somehow.

that is one hell of a libido and growth spurt there!!!

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