Pinkie keeps trying to throw Anon a Welcome to Our World party. Anon keeps getting injured during her attempts. But this time she totally has everything perfect. Nothing can go wrong.
Right?
Written as a patron fic request.
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Pretty solid Anon tale, not that I'm much of a connoisseur of the genre. I gather the snark is a character trait across stories, but it still comes across as uncomfortable and abrasive. Everyone else is quite on point in a S1 sorta way. I miss this picture of Twilight more than I care to admit; not that I don't like it when characters progress, mind you. This is kind of like looking of pictures of one's dog as a puppy and saying "Aw, look at how cute she was!" So that was well done.
One more pass for typos wouldn't hurt ("specie's","Mrs. Cakes") and I am left wondering why so many parties have happened between Anon's arrival and his welcome party, but overall I quite enjoyed. Thanks for writing!
These tales are like delicious candy that is horrible for me but I snarf them down anyway.
You nailed the irreverent tone perfectly and everyone’s SPOT ON!
Great work, yo. :)
kek
Scribbler? Writing Anon? I'M ON BOARD.
this was funny scribbler your really good at writing comedy too. now i've read a comdey of scribbler's, a darkfic from you, i've read a grimdark from you, a tragedy/drama from you. they were all good what's next a thriller or ooh a mystery. i look forward to it
Solid 10/10 top kek yesgoodyesthanksmuch
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So the surpriser has just been "surprised"! See Pinkie? We can pull that too. 🤗
Though, I'd harken well to Twilight's "advice". Damn Ponies indeed.
good job
Good build-up, but it needs a better punchline. Or a punchline at all. I love what you've done with the characters, but it still feels like the first, or even second, part of a three act show.
Yup. Humans would definitely not last long in Equestria.
A+ my dude
Damn humans. cant u just be happy anon?
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barrels
Cake
not gonna read it because its not my cup'o tea but the 1# shit poster cup earned an upvote.
gday.
Do it purple smart! I never back down for a challenge. If your so petty you want revenge on me pulling a small harmless prank on someone who is so inept on safety standards that I get injured multiple times, then I will bring a hellstorm of sarcastic annoyance upon you so hard that the end only comes when you give up or both of us dies. And I promise you if I die first I will force myself to haunt your ass!
Just what is Sparkle butt's problem with Quesadillas?
Yeah, a spell, huh. I'm calling it now. Twilight has the death note.
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And thusly Pinkie was a terrible friend who cared more avout her own desires than thw wellveing of those she claims to care about, and discards previously leanred lessons in favor of self-gratification.
"Threaten me again, Twilight Sparkle, and I'll rip that pretty little head of yours off of your shoulders."
That would be my response to her little quip about inducing heart attacks.
I love it!
“You know,” she said mildly. “I can actually induce heart attacks."
I looked her square in the eye with a steely gaze.
"You're threatening me, Twilight?" I asked, "Need I remind you that I didn't even want to come here? You had to bribe me, remember; and now you're threatening me? I can still go home, and I'm sure Pinkie would be really curious as to why I would come all the way out here just to leave immediately."
Nah, but for real, that was a super OOC thing for Twi to say.
How does Pinkie know what Inception is?
Funny story tho
hhhhmmm would have been interessting to see him actually not to go if he doesn't wants to.
Is this a story again with the logic like "humans have to be weaker than Cartoon characters and die much easier?"
SInce it's theory anyway, the cartoon world could also work differently and in the end everything from the cartoon world could be less harmfull for a human and the cartoons less stronger than we think they are.
I didn't liked this so much, I actually expected Pinkie itself to beg for him to go to another or this party like in the picture.
That and I kind of hoped the ending would make a good opening for a romance sequel, however I don't really feel it.
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Depends on the story, but likely because of her genre awareness. In the show she knows things she should not and can use the cartoon physics of her world to do usually impossible things like offscreen teleportation or appearing in impossible places. One hilarious example of this is when Luna crashed because she got pulled into Pinkies traveling via scene wipes.
Knowing Anon, I'm sure he'd take up that "induced heart failure" offer.
Cause why? Colored faces were normal then!
Or is it cause this guy hasn't stick a figure body?
Maybe he needs plastic horse accessories!?
I'm on Anons side 100%... Hush it Twilight!
Neat detail! (great you don't spell out why! True fans only^^)
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Done reading in ten minutes flat. Hm to bad...
If nothing else, I like how you wrote Twilight. :)
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that was really out of place
Princess of friendship everyone, making you go I under cardiac arrest
I would slam my door in their faces after the first time that I told them that I wasn't going. Unless they hired Trixie to provide entertainment at it. Then, and only then, would I willingly agree to do something that sounds like it's going to end up with me in the hospital. Otherwise, they wouldn't get me to go.
Damn ponies indeed.
Again? Ok. Damn ponies. U Done yet?
3 Times the charm. Damn ponies.
Now it's getting old. Damn ponies.
AAAND. YOU'RE OUT! Damn Ponies.
Just try to touch me and you'll realize that it's like a invisible Barrier that only i can control and you cannot move it unless i move myself because it's locked straight onto me, even through the ground aka don't try to dig below me and then jump me. AND DON'T U EVEN TRY TO 4TH WALL YOUR WAY THROUGH THIS
Because, NO.
No seriously don't mess with me:3
Bruh i literally Quoted all 5 of them! Took me 2 minutes of my life to accomplish this, GG
ANYWAYS...Send me into Equestria with my High-Tech Gear that i own and only i can use and then try to get me to go to a Party hosted by Pinkie Pie! I wanna know what happens when they find out that that it'll be most likely impossible. Especially if i have my Forcefield around me
Great fanfic