The Pony Who Hates Everything

You run into a pony who seems to be the 'Debbie Downer' of Ponyville. A feeling deep in your chest decides to make her day a bit better. What you find changes everything you know about cutie marks and your perspective on ponies.

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Nebulus

Nebulus #1 · Aug 25th, 2017 · 7 · ·

Aww, that was sweet.
Good job, Presto.

Alex_

Alex_ #2 · Aug 25th, 2017 · 8 · ·

"I'm sorry, what was your name?" you ask the tomato mare.
"Way! Tomato Way."

I like to imagine she looks a bit like this.
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Well, except for BonBon on occasion, but she's just been having a rough time recently.

So this and The Disappearing Act both take place in the same universe? I wonder which of your other stories also do...

I really enjoyed this story. It was funny and heartwarming in equal amounts. Thanks Priest.

Mist_Chaser

Mist_Chaser #3 · Aug 25th, 2017 · · ·

I like this mare

Tony Montana

Tony Montana #4 · Aug 25th, 2017 · 2 · ·

"Let's just call each other by what people look like. Look, we can call that Earth pony "Mud," because he clearly works in the mud all day. Or we can call that zebra- "

But no seriously, I loved this. I always enjoy a little bit of sweet mushiness in my library and this did a good job delivering. I also like how you reinterpreted the violent aspect of her name from killing or hurting ponies to "killing" their feelings in a sense. Very creative.

billykilly

billykilly #5 · Aug 25th, 2017 · · ·

Great job!!!

Shocks

Shocks #6 · Aug 25th, 2017 · · ·

what's with all these meta horse stories

Flutterpriest

Flutterpriest #7 · Aug 25th, 2017 · · ·

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Meta horse stories? How are they meta? Is that a negative thing?

Papa Dragon

Papa Dragon #8 · Aug 25th, 2017 · · ·

Bitchy pony is awesome.
Very lovely & touching piece.

Shocks

Shocks #9 · Aug 25th, 2017 · · ·

8387810 like, they're all coming from 4chan

greentext bby

HoneyBadgerr

HoneyBadgerr #10 · Aug 25th, 2017 · · ·

That was really unique. I liked it.

Flutterpriest

Flutterpriest #11 · Aug 25th, 2017 · · ·

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Well, I was a greentexter before I ever posted on here. I've just gotten used to writing prose over greentext. I gotta update my bin and put this in AiE

Keepcalmandcupcakes

Keepcalmandcupcakes #12 · Aug 25th, 2017 · 2 · ·

>You'd rather know, and try your best, rather than leave this thread in your life hanging.
I see what you did there.

Flutterpriest

Flutterpriest #13 · Aug 26th, 2017 · · ·

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I could hug you for noticing.

MrAquino

MrAquino #14 · Aug 26th, 2017 · 7 · ·

Thought it was going to be a crossover with this fellow.pbs.twimg.com/profile_images/815023528433033216/8mEaJvur.jpg

Grave Walker

Grave Walker #15 · Aug 26th, 2017 · 1 · ·

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Same...

Minalkra

Minalkra #16 · Aug 26th, 2017 · · ·

AMuffinlover

AMuffinlover #17 · Aug 26th, 2017 · 9 · ·

Just then, a piercing voice cuts through the crowd. "HA!! AS IF. WHAT A JOKE?! YOU CAN TAKE YOUR CAPITALIST OVERLORD PRICES AND SHOVE IT!"

Yes my communist friend, we shall take down the dirty capitalists for the people!!

“You’re being childish,” she says. “I’m just going to be mean to you.”
“Fine.”
“I’m going to make you hate everything, especially me.”
“Whatever.”
“I’m going to hurt you so badly, that you will never want to see me again,” she shouts at you.
“I’ll take that chance,” you say back.

What a Tsundere

ZodiacalComet

ZodiacalComet #18 · Aug 27th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Do you have any idea what that’s like? To know the perfect thing at all times to hurt somepony? To tear somepony apart? Or heck, to hurt somepony when you wanted to say something kind?!