Bonnie talks to a friend the time she needs it the most. Even if it's not a conversation she wanted to have. Or even a conversation she ever expected she would be having.
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Been on a train
Oh, damn. That was good.
This was sweet... I really like how you kept the talking ambiguous to how it was happening. There were a few itty bitty typos in here that you might want to go back to fix and one instance of 'person' that should probably be replaced with 'pony' but otherwise this was a well done story!
This was very powerful and emotive writing, Priest. I really loved reading it. The use of Raggie as a symbol, and of Bon Bon's changing relationship with her over the course of her life, I thought was especially brilliant. Good job
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Thanks! I fixed the person thing and I ran it through a spell check and gave it a solid read before posting. I'll give it another read to catch what I might have missed.
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That's some enviable dedication!
Solid advice.
It's a remarkable irony that we often have all the answers... for everyone else. We can be so good at helping to solve our friends', our families' problems both physical and metaphysical... yet we can rarely muster ability to solve our own. We can look at our own problems, however severe they may be, and just blink unknowingly on how to proceed, as if we hadn't dealt with something extraordinarily similar with an aching friend a mere week ago. Or perhaps, even worse, we don't know what's wrong.
And that's the most terrifying: not knowing why you feel the way you do. Because then, when surrounded by those who love you, you still somehow manage to feel the most alone. Really, it just takes some practice opening up to those that matter. Practice, practice, and more practice.
A simple, important message. Good story, my dude.
Nice job, Raggy.
You did it, Raggie. Good job.
This was heartbreaking though
The way I see it, BonBon was asleep and dreamed about her plan and going through with it and Raggie was Princess Luna convincing BonBon to give life in Ponyville one last shot.
O-Oh.
This hit me super hard. Harder than it really should. I've been crying for the past five minutes.
No, thank you but thank you.
It's always nice to see others get what they need.