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ObabScribbler


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When Lyra has a cold, Bon-Bon ventures out into the driving rain to fetch something she really wants. The act causes her to think back on their friendship and the unpredictable turns it has taken over the years.

Lyra/Bon-Bon if you squint. BYO subtext.

Now with a fantastic full-cast fanfic reading by TheLostNarrator!

Cover is giftart by Dusk Spark and can be found here.

Titanium Dragon wrote a review of this fic here.

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Aww, that was cute. :twilightsmile:

Hmmm... that was nice, short and sweet is the way to go sometimes.

That was really good.

That was charming and elegantly done. :twilightsmile:

That was adorable

Good grief, Lyra is me! I tend to be rather dramatic when I'm sick, or so I'm told, and I'm a die hard brony. I would so be like this!:pinkiesmile:

Man, this made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Great thing to read before bed on a really sad night, it's like hot chocolate for the heart. :heart:

I was disappointed that this story was complete after I looked for more chapters! I loved it. Lyrabon 5ever.

D'aawwww Such a cute story!:raritystarry:

Thanks for the pick-me-up:raritywink:

Nice story, Scribbler.:twilightsmile:
But just out of curiosity, why put a copyright notice at the top of your story?

That was sweet, I have always liked bon-bon heartstrings fics :twilightblush: :heart:

Just came from Astrobrony's reading on YouTube ^_^ very nice story and so cute/sweet.

LOVE the little inside "brony/humy"/(MPP/MLP) joke thing, LuLz
Peace.

... the feels

Just listened to the audio reading, It was terrific!

Keep up the good work!

before i could get around to reading this, Lost does that reading, which was really good.

i love this story. at first, just because it was a cute lyrabonbon fic, but it took a second time listening for me to realize you also made lyra the pony for human equivalent of a brony and were portraying us through her. very clever, scribbler. very clever indeed

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BYO subtext.

A likely story. :trixieshiftright: You put that subtext there and you know it! >:B Bon-Bon is motivated by guilt because it's the only emotion she'll cop to! This is obvously a prelude to Lyrabon. :V Because you have good taste in shipping.

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It is less subtext and more "text with a little bit of whiteout sloppily applied over it which is beginning to flake off at the end."

I've loved this story since the first time I read it. It does so much characterization in such a tiny space, it is hard to believe that it is as short as it is.

I wrote a review of this story here.

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Oh wow, thank you so much!

5417202
Thank you for writing a good story! :heart:

Hey, I wrote a review for this story. In case you are interested, it can be found here.

This is certainly a great fic. Compact, very well characterized, and delightful to read all around. I wish more authors wrote shipping like this.

Silly Lyra and her Humans fandom...
My little human, my little human...

, but Bon-Bon always called ponyfeathers on that argument.

Um.........
soooo "ponyfeathers" means bullshit in Equestria?
:rainbowhuh:

This just so happens to be the last story I read before I call it a night :twilightsmile:. And what a way to end it (the story, and my slumber :twilightsheepish:).

Though this was short, not a single word was put to waste. The character development was highly notable :ajsmug:. I also eulogize those writers who inform or a piece of history :twistnerd:. And finally, as 5395537 mentioned, how you depicted Lyra similarly to a brony :pinkiesad2:.

If only there was a music accompaniment of a lyre, I wouldn't even hesitate to give you...

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Best Wishes,
~ Mystic Stirling ;P

I. Love. It. Iloveitiloveitiloveitiloveitiloveit!!

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