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MisterAlexShark1234


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Hmm. What about a chapter where super tiny humans (ant size or smaller) try to survive beneath some unaware ponies?

Keep it up man this is going to be not good but gold.

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If you've got an idea, write up a story and I'll put it up.

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Yeah, sorry for it being so short. I just wanted to write something that would serve as an example chapter.

8171320 No, thanks. Too lazy :D

Okay, but I found a thing you may want to edit.

“You taste wonderful,” Celestia said. “Like a nice cold sunday on a hot summer day.”

Since you're talking about the ice cream dessert, that should be "sundae".

Nice chapter, but I found a couple typos you may want to edit.

I was afraid J would be caught by someone who would like nothing more than to torture me.

"I"

Wholy shit,” Adagio said breathlessly.

"Holy".

Just to know, are you going to add something to this?
Maybe some chapters with the other girls?
That would be great

Hmm... there are some common mistakes when the mare have sex, when she have her orgasm... her parts will try to passively "milk" him in and not push him out, and theres also the winking that is missing, I understand the first chapter was the opening or test, just keep it in mind these differences in how a human(eg) and a pony should work in future chapters.

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Well typically since the ponies of my little pony are more human like than regular ponies, I just decided to write it like that. Besides, you'll find that a good majority of the people who write this stuff do the same.

I've not seen an -Anthro- Tales from tiniest so
I dream of castle

I want to see where this goes so: I don't dream of anything

This is too sweet! I don't dream of anything I wanna see his reaction to -Not- teleporting anywhere

When I first read 'he's been in there for nine months' I was like WTF?! it makes sense because he did climb into the womb after all. I found it interesting and a little strange But with a sweet twist to it and I think that this story is great but before anything gets too weird cuz incest is now a thing I dream of bedroom. You do a Great job on these by the way

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Thank you! So did you mean you wanted incest with Cadence and Gleaming Shield in this?

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Ayyy honestly I'm down for anything I'm just -Not- that into incest but I kinda like where this is going so I'm fine either way this story is very sweet

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