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MisterAlexShark1234


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I clicked the wrong story... DAMN YOU RANDOMIZER!!!

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The real question is, did you enjoy it?

Okay story. Found a couple typos you may want to fix.

I'm not sire what my magic might do to you in this state so I don't want to carry you with levitation, and if you're on my back I might not notice if you fall off.

That should be "sure".

She moaned as she felt the tiny mares enter her stomach, and laid on her side as she felt Twilight struggle inside of her belly.

And that should be "mare" since there's only the one.

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I'd give it 8 edible Twilights outta 10.

Not into vore, but this story surprised me. Pretty cute. Would read a sequel. Maybe Twi grows back to normal size in Celestia's belly or something.

If I had to guess how good Twilight tasted, she was magically delicious.

This is an interesting concept. I've got to use it myself sometime.

ah, the classic "I'm only carrying you in my mouth I swear I'll let you out oh oops I swallowed you" gag.

Classic.

Please make a sequel :applecry: but yes I rate 9 trollestias out off ten :trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

She was, after all, going to let Twilight out…

Or...the reason she stopped struggling was because she passed out from lack of air.

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