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Rarity is certain of only two things—that hundreds of spring flowers are in bloom across the town, and that Twilight Sparkle is the most beautiful mare in all of Equestria.
Well, there's just one thing for a romantic like Rarity to do.
[Featuring sassy wisdom apple horse and messenger derp horse.]
An entry in Monochromatic's Interwoven Colours Contest
Cover art by Multiversecruise
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oh! i didn't know you were in that contest madame pie... xD
Good Luck
Looks fun, I'll give it a read. Mono's got my reading queue backed up with nothing but Raritwi.
I'll have to read this later when I'm not in Ireland and active 24/7. I'm sure it's good, though
I liked it :)
I did a quick skim of the story, and I like the fancy dividing lines and the big capital letter. Make sit look more official. I'm gonna read it in depth now and I'll comment later when I have wi-fi. I'm on a tour of Ireland with choir right now and there aren't many breaks or internet.
Until then, cheers.
She.
As always, your Rarity is amazing and writing impeccable. I really enjoy your platonic Rarijack too. Please keep writing! These longer stories really showcase your talent.
Your stories are still so cute after all this time! I need to go back and read the rest of your stories that I may have missed!
Umm, that sounds—problematic.
Really, really cute. Loved it.
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Whoops XD
Loved it. The idea of leaving notes every day, increasing in meaning, is very cute. Even if you're uncertain that you'll ever be heard by that secret crush (that's not so secret). Of course she reciprocated, I totally saw it coming. I'm gonna have to find fancy dividers for my stories now, cause it looks cooler and more professional.
Great job. Hope you win something in the contest! Cheers.
So...cute!
Cannot...withstand...the urge to...
D'aaww!
Well done, very well done indeed.
This was so cute! I loved the idea of Rarity sending flowers and short notes to Twilight, I thought it was very sweet!
This story makes me wonder how many secret love notes Derpy delivers.
I enjoyed both the pacing and the concept. Twilight's general cluelessness, and Rarity's determination to dwell on hope with out substance. Well done.
Oh. My. Goodness. This was incredibly adorable. I love every second of it! This is top tier Raritwi feel-good slightly cheesy romance right here, the kind that just makes you want to snuggle a bunny and frolic through a field.
I love the ending and the whole concept of Rarity giving Twilight flowers is just to sweet for words! It just makes me giddy just thinking about it!
Well written, no unnecessary/overboard drama or cheese, cute as hell, I could visualize the whole story in my head vividly, very much in character....
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Thank you for writing such a lovely story!
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My goodness, I'm so glad you liked it so much <3
That was adorable and fluffy and completely fantastic. I can't find a single thing to complain about or anything of the sort. Well done, well done indeed.
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it >~<
Greetings!
I'm with the Reviewer's Cafe, you have requested a review of this story.
Here it is!
Thanks and Cheers!
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Thank you very much for the review! I know I have a good long way to go for writing romance stories (I also have no idea how love works X3). Your review was very helpful, and hopefully I can improve in the future. Rarilight is such a sweet ship, isn't it?
I also saw that you added my story to favorites? Regardless of its flaws, I'm glad you enjoyed it <3
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Raritwi is certainly a very cute ship. I added the story because you show some good potential. Given your age, and given time to learn about life and love, you can be an amazing author. And I went through your author page, and you remind me a lot of daughter. Similar age too. So, keep up the writing. I'd love to be able to accept one of your stories to the Cafe.
When it comes to writing, certainly write what you know. But learn about as much as you can. Romance is hard to write. It's hard to quantify the feeling that go through you when you are in love. But keep it up.
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Thank you!
Missing word
A lovely Raritwi piece.
Subtle Rarity
Ditzy accidently saves the day again
Cute story.