Pinkie has devised a plan to hug Twilight, who just might finally realize something.
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*Fic is about hugging Alicorns*
*Has Twi as a unicorn in the Cover Art*
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7063536
In the title?
7063540 You might've read that pre-edit.
7063546
ok, sorry
7063552 After looking around for a bit, it is a lot harder to find a good picture of Pinkie hugging alicorn Twilight than I thought.
7063563
I actually just got one!
7063565 ft86club.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=71039&stc=1&d=1395100722
Meh, because of my heartless body I can't feel cuteness anymore. It took countless days and nights but this was a okay story for what you was trying to do.
A quick cute story about Twilight and Pinkie, for me it meh. But I can see it as a okay story for me. Not great or terrible just okay. But just my thoughts.
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k! I appreciate your thoughts
HUGGLEZ!
I wonder if Pinkie could do the same for CHRYSALIS? Feed the hive for a year with that much d'awwwww!
I love reading your stories!
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Thank you! This was kinda just a filler, but I'm glad you enjoyed it regardless
7063678
That is very true
But Pinkie lives on a whole other plane of existance
Pinkie...and twilight.........well.......one word to describe this....it- "ITS ABOUT ME!"
Pinkie hush...it's really REALLY CUTE
A lot.
Well wasn't that nice. I enjoyed the story, I felt that Pinkie and Twilight could have talked about love a bit more to better drive the point home, but this was nice as it was.
Nice, cute and simple ^^. Keep at it!
Putting this on my favorites list. This was adorable
Cute. Not a terribly whole lot to it, but cute nonetheless.
Another story on my favourites list!!! Good job on the story, I really liked it and it was well written.
Another space on the favourites shelf filled.
You have got a real good handle on pinkies crazy, if such a thing is possible...
I'm starting to think I'm doomed to a 10/1 ratio
*crosses fingers for 100*
Next story must be called Derpy snuggles
Or to snuggle a Derpy
This story, my friend, has earned you a like, a favourite and a watch! I love this!
7068014 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, my friend
7068023 EDITOR MODE ACTIVATE!
A few grammatical errors:
It's 'well', not 'welp'. Unless you meant 'whelp', but that wouldn't really something Twilight would think about Pinkie.
It's 'forelegs', not 'arms'. Here's a chart to understand the proper terms:
equinespot.com/images/horse-body-parts.jpg
and again...
Technically, ponies have 'barrels' although it could be called a 'barrel chest' or just 'chest' for short. Even this chart uses the term 'chest' instead of 'barrel'.
It's not enough to break the immersion for most people. Other than that, it's a good short story.
7068251
Thank you! You are very insightful about horses. Although, I believe "welp" is a word, just more of a slang
I seriously have no idea why this got 100+ likies
7069110 Because it's mega-cute and your sentence structure is diverse and it's mega-cute and your sense for line-breaking is pretty much flawless and did I mention it's also mega-cute? Because it kind of is.
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Oh. Thank you
Awww: Cute, amusing, short and sweet. And the characters were absolutely perfectly handled :)
Just one thing I noticed:
Shouldn't that be 'Cadance'?
Hugging mission complete.
That was a nice and sweet story to read.
7068251
Actually your provided illustration demonstrates that "arm" would be just as correct as "foreleg," as part of those limbs is referred to as the "forearm."
7082198 Well humans, ponies and birds have a scapula, radius and an ulna, but birds don't have arms and humans don't have wings. While a pony has a forearm, it doesn't have an arm. While technically the forelimb of any vertebrate is an arm, it's just not normally used that way in regards to any other creature than a human or a primate. Just sayin'.
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Except, as you just said, they are technically arms. Also, magical ponies DO seem to use them like arms sometimes. They carry spears, manipulate tools, and hold straws dramatically.
Cute!
Quite adorable. I'm not a huge Twinkie shipper, but that's just me. This, I think, is cute enough to warrant you a like, a fave, and a follow.
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Sure, I just added it
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Oh, I'm really sorry... I have no idea
7092095
That's great! And thanks for the follow!
I love it! Pinkie at her "Pinkiest" and Twilight at her "Twilighest", with a nice idea.
That was sweet. I do have one question, though.
What am I to do with this diabetes?
Simple cute fluff is never a bad thing. Ends a touch abruptly, but still good fun all around.
actually, there are four (and a half?) kinds of love
Storge: familial love; kinship
Agape/Kenosis: the love of 'man' for god and the love of god for 'man'
Eros: Romantic love
Phillia: Besides being a convenient pun,
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Friendship.
All of your stories that I've read so far are cute and adorable!
This was short and sweet, and the ending made me smile big. Sorry that this isn't as in depth as the comment you left on my story. I think you did a great job on this. I admire your ability to keep everyone in character, for instance how Twilight is trying to find a logical "equation" per se for love, even thought it's an extremely abstract concept. Though in Twilight's world, nothing is abstract. Then Pinkie bouncing around everywhere.
Great job.
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Aww, thanks! And its no problem! I don't know if you feel you have to "repay" the comment... you don't. But I'm glad you liked it
Sooooo...
Step 1: Find an alicorn.
Step 2: Nonsense.
Step 3: Hug the alicorn.
Seems pretty straightforward.
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Thank you very much for the review. It was quite helpful
Aw, of course you can be my friend!