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Harmony Pie


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another harmony pie story? yes please!! i'll read this a bit later :D

This was so cute and adorable you should do at least three or four sequels to it. :twilightsmile: I enjoyed every part of this story wonderfully written and well thought out you did a good job on this. A piece of excellent work.

Daww, this was sweet, and it's always great to see more from you!

Twilight is pretty much me these days tbh. It's not fun.

Very cute and warm, Harmony. You write Sunset and Twilight very well.

And as to why you are still here...it's because you are a fantastic writer and we all love you.


Looking forward to your next story about these two!

Awww... Harmony, you're awesome. Never stop writing, and never stop making cute fluff:rainbowkiss::twilightsmile:

Haha, RIP Sunset.

Well, this equals untold embarrassment for Sunset. As for why you're still here Harmony, maybe it's because you're a talented writer and we love you for it?

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eeee That was so cute thank you so much.

Very fluffy. I approve, and request more such things.

Sunset’s eyes are too heavy. Which is a shame, because she wishes she could stay in this horrible, awkward, wonderful moment forever. She never wants the harsh reality of morning to come. (Who knew Sleepy Twilight was so cuddly?) Just as she’s drifting off, Sunset swears she feels a feather-light kiss to her temple.

SO CUDDLY

Sunlight blinds her vision.

Funny I thought that's what happened last night :rainbowlaugh:

Bonus chapter? a bit more story on the aftermath.

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Love you’re enthusiasm! :raritywink: I’m glad you liked it

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You need some milk

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Aw, thank you. You’re so sweet:heart:

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Probably not... but we’ll have to see

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I need therapy :V

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It's all good 👍

The fluff is way up there in numbers.

This was adorable! Kinda wish you extended the part where their friends walk in a little.

This was so cute! Too bad it didn't really extend on when the friends walked in, but maybe there will be a bonus chapter?

Ridiculously cute.

Well done and pefect picture for the coverart, to boot!

~Skeeter The Lurker

A door bursts open, and five people crowd in. Sunlight blinds her vision.

“OH MY GOD.”

Who said it? I'm betting Rainbow.

I think that the only person to whom Twilight needs to prove her worth is herself. Of course, it's always been that way for her, hasn't it?

Very nice, well done!

Is this one of the most cliche things I’ve ever written? Yes. Do I regret it? No. (It was too cute.)

Not sure if I would call it a cliche, to me it looked like she was sleep deprived and maybe acted on feelings she already had? Well the love at first sight aspect could maybe called a clichee here.

I like it. I have to stop here, I did something else and forgot what I wanted to reply here, have a good day.

Beautiful! A real work of art.

Adorable. Simple, sunlight. win win win.

Very very nice. More evidence of why Sunlight is my favorite pairing...period.

Can this ship get any cuter...oh wait, it did with this story. Love this very much.

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I can vouch that this does happen. Not often, and it didn't turn out as good, but it happens.

Sunlight blinds her vision.

I see what you did there. :twilightsmile:

This is so cuddly and i love it.

Awwwwwwwwwwww - this was heartwarming

Oh my GOSH this is illegally cute.

“Thanks, Sunset,” she slurs, “you’re such a great friend.” Twilight tips her head and takes a huge gulp of the drink. Some of it trickles down her chin, going unnoticed. She makes a weird face, her cheeks bulging as she swallows. “This,” she starts, wrinkling her nose, “is the most disgusting thing I’ve ever tasted.”

I would not trying to keep up the illusion that warm milk is actually good, it's disgusting it smells disgusting it tastes disgusting the only time milk should be warm is when it's the base of hot chocolate, it's only because hot chocolate is just hot chocolate milk chocolate milk is the only milk that's not disgusting warm

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