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This story is a sequel to I am NOT a Pony
It has been one year since Luna lost her son, and depression has gripped her heart. She's lost the will and the strength to perform her duties. She see's her son when she closes her eyes. His death haunts her, literally and figuratively. She's not sure if she's losing her mind, or if his spirit is really haunting her. But something dark is definitely happening...something Luna has yet to understand.
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I think I'm going to keep track of this.
That is one pretty sea quill.
And yes Luna, you ARE crazy.
Please continue
Intriguing...
Continue.
Interesting so far, I am looking forward to see the next chapter.
great to see the new chapter
And there goes what little sympathy I had for Celestia.
Sure Luna this is totally all Discord's fault.
And its not like that u took him away from his adopted family where he was happy, turned him into a pony against his will, and took advantage of his amnesia or anything of the-OH WAIT!
Seriously I'm looking forward to Tristan handing Moonbitch her royal, lunar ass.
8057563 She still believes Luna is the victim despite what she has done and isn't locking her up or punishing her.
That cover photo... I can't fucking breathe dude.
8057895 Do you find it funny?
Am I the only one who hopes Tristian forgives and accepts Luna as his mother? I mean if I lost my own son I would do anything to get him back!
Come on Tristan! Show those bitches that humans are not to be trifled with!
dark
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Is it wrong that I enjoyed this chapter?
Hmm, in spite of what's happened to Tristan, I hope he can forgive his mother someday...
8092668 I hope he does forgive her too but if she really loves him then she should sent him back home!
Ok, are we sure Tristan is human anymore? Because I think that with all this magic voodoo, he's not thinking straight.
You turn him in to a bug? When writer think bug ponies, why do they mix mutation as well? Stupid!
Aw damnit, now Tristan is being slowly mind controlled by Crysalis. This guy just can't catch a break, I'm beginning to think that he's never going home at this point
neat! but the question is, who is playing who in this
Honestly I'm not even mad, I like Chrysalis as a character a lot when she's not incompetently written.
At least Luna is admiting her mistakes.
Im pretty sure killing Luna isnt going to get him back home! Remember it takes 4 alicorns to perform the spell, So if Luna dies then there no way for him to get back!
Karma's a real bitch, ain't it Luna?
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Leave her alone! Hasn't she suffered enough?
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when you think that you have hit the lowest part... life can teach you that it can be lower than you tink, soo... so yeah... she can take more.
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no
You guys can keep giving my comments dislikes and negative replys all you want but I have my opinion and you have yours! I don't think what Luna did was right but shes his true mother and he should at least give her a chance!
I, too, would resent Luna for tearing me away from Home and Family, but this is going on a little long.
Just get it over with and either kill her or whatever you wish, I don't see the point in this extended torture when it can be over with already.
And besides, Chrysalis is still forwarding her own plans to manipulate our long suffering Human.
Mmmmmmmmmmmmm, I'm not liking this situation
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True mother would have waited for Tristan to be an adult or contacted him in parts instead of just capturing him and doing a mind-wipe to his adoptive parents. Stealing Tristan away was not about him it was all about her, and playing make believe after amnesia? All about her.
Luna is just deranged, sad little mare who should not have custody rights as she is mentally unstable and danger to herself and others... not really worthy of revenge, but children are foolish and Tristan is a child torn away from all he knows by foolishness and greed of deranged wannabe-mother.
This is what is usually wrong with revenges, you usually end up hurting people who are not well and when looked from afar it is justified but utterly sad... and this case idiotic since who ever says "Hey you remember that Luna fellow who went full Nightmare Moon and almost froze the world once she was rejected? Lets totally make her feel rejected for petty revenge!"
Well maybe 13 year old little boy torn from his family.
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The loss of a child can do something to a mare! Cant it?
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Yes it can, to be honest people to blame here would be Celestia and other princesses who enabled her to commit such a sin. But being mentally unstable is no defense really, and even if it earns sympathy it does not mean she should have any claim on the child, that all vanished the moment she decided to just kidnap him and tamper with the minds of his parents.
Such things should not be allowed, and one can only wonder why such a thing was allowed in the first place, and how endemic such uses of mind magic by glorious leaders of ponies truly are. Celestia hesitated in regards to ponies, but seemed to have no such qualms with the humans as she was part of the ritual.
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Yeah that counts as something right?
For you guys who hate Luna know this! She's the only one who can send Tristian back home! Best keep that in mind!
Why do I continue to read this story?! I hate it, but I can't stop wondering what will happen next!
And now we see the grand scheme come to fruition.
hmmm, what is happening here i wonder.
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I have a similar situation when it comes to life