I like to write grim dark. Every now and then there may be some questionable content but you will know if there is.
Queen Chyrsalis has wondered the woods hungry and alone. When she is very weak she hears a some colts coming up on her. Unable to defend herself she changes he look in hope that they would just leave her.
But instead a kind colt and his friend rescue her. After waking up in a hospital who knows what her fate will be.
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Good Story however you need a proof-reader, multiple grammar and spelling errors I like everything you have done so far.
Alyssa Hartwick made the picture, right?
8022428 Acutally no I made that. I didn't have money and didn't know anypony that would give e a digital like it for free so I made it myself and liked how it turned out.
8021676 Completely agree hoping to have my mom prof read though I am unsure introducing my mo to a fanfiction website is the best idea, she is the only person I know that had gone to college for something like that
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If you don't want to introduce her to a fanfic website you could always edit it on something like Google Docs, I find that works well for me. If you have two computers it works even better cause then you can look at it at the same time as your editor and I've found that's helped my writing out a lot.
Try some of your friends or even this site's writers, they may know of a good proof-reader or do it themselves.
If this happen in the show to prove Chrysalis' hatred towards ponies then she's the victim than a villain.
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I know. I had the ending for this story when I first started writing it. Chrysalis was always going to die. Leaving behind Trance and her daughter to hold her legacy. but her is where I was really trying to get at.
The monster of the past was living peacefully, yet the people she harmed didn't wish to believe it to be so. SO instead they hunt her, and when they find her the outcome is horrible. Please tell me now, who is the monster?
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Ponies and the Tree of Harmony with its elements since they show only ponies wielding them.