After accidentally using a spell to summon a human she's been talking to online, Luna discovers that happiness comes from unexpected sources.
To those of you tracking this story, I'm back! That's right, Lunar Love is off of it's hiatus period. Expect more within the month!
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lol, Great story.
btw, it's me X2 (P) Vinyl_Scratch
This has potential to be a great story...just one thing...
Luna seems to fall for this human in the space of a few minutes. I'm not hating on you, disrespecting you or saying that this is a bad story at all. I am just pointing out that this, even in the first chapter, seems rushed.
But none the less, I will keep an eye on this.
ooh, y'all got me! i'm anticipating the next chapter!
btw: i was going to post a story with the exact same name. y'all beat me to it, lol
"Your a magical pony princess with wings and a horn, who lost control of her magic, and that's how I got here?"
I'm sure you meant to use the contraction form (You're) instead of the possessive form (Your). Might wanna fix that.
All in all, a good story.
i like it fav then watch
This is a great story! Do you mind if I present this on Canterlot.net's live stream?
but i like the comments with stupid pictures... :(
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Not at allm as a matter of fact i'd be honered.
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I see what you mean. I was in a bit off a hurry to finish chap.1 so i can write rhe good stuff
Dont worry, it wont b a problem.
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Heres a link to the stream Cantercast live stream episode 7
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Pfft
954743
Good to hear. Will look forward to see what this turns into. Just take your time and put some real patience into it. It pays off in the end. Trust me
UUUUGH! I have been writing a story for months with the same name. Dang. now I have to find a new tytle.
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Haha sorry mate
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Fixed
I gotta thank all of you for your support. This is only the second fic i've written, and you all have been awesome. I'd like to thank the Cantercast 7 crew for the mention, X2 (L) Better When Frozen, my clanmate on steam, for helping me edit this and creating a rough sketch of Avril (If you all want, i'll post that as the picture at the top) and Seraphic Borealis for further editing and support, and most of all, my newly found readers and fans for helping me get noticed here on FIMfiction. There is MUCH more i'm gonna do for this story, and i hope all of you enjoy it. I'm working on chap 2 now, so hang in there
-Midnight
i liked this story you just need to update it more often and i think youll get much more followers, like try to make a few chapters and then release them periodicly
EDIT: i meant like i still like it
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See, while that WOULD be a good idea, i don't have the patience
Your story doesn't have any huge grammatical errors, and the concept is interesting enough, but there is one fairly huge flaw in it: this is really, REALLY rushed. You end up skipping around too much, and only putting in the bare minimum of necessary scenes to advance the plot. The result of this is that you strip from the story all of the scenes that would give any real depth to your characters and allow the readers to become attached to them. It's not bad enough for me to give the story a thumbs down, but it's not good enough for me to give it a thumbs up either. If you decide to revisit this story at some point and flesh it out more I'll come back and give it another read, but until then, this is where I check out.
Huh, it never showed the story updated for me. I just found it waiting while perusing my favorites list.
Sorry to hear it. Happens to me too :(
You need a bit of minor editing. Mostly uncapitalized 'i's.
how did this update 7 weeks ago and im just now seeing it
This could make things awkward when she sees Luna again.
>Logs on
>20 favorites/comments/watches
HOLY CRAP! Where'd you all come from? XD
2196307i.chzbgr.com/maxW500/4498969344/h23C3E379/ It's cool man.
Oh, jeez, that pacing.