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This good story
This was a good chapter!! I can't wait for the next one
I honestly wasn't expecting any clop, but it was good none the less
I still cant wait for The mane 6 to see Spike's new form
Good chapter.
Maybe to bring Spike to the mane six something happens to them, Force Spike and Misty to go see them.
Example like some dark creature comes out of nowhere and Spike and Misty have to go stop it
Was expecting a lemon, but was not expecting it to be so "dirty"? I guess.
Good chapter though.
I know Spike is going to run into the Mane 6 again, as happily ever after is no good for plot development. But please don't let it be something obvious and cliche like a dark monster comes out of nowhere and ONLY spikes new dark magic can beat it. That cliche sucked when "A Canterlot Wedding" did it, its always sucked, it always will.
Twilight and the gang are pretty good monster fighters, and backing them up is Immortal True Alicorn Celestia and Luna (screw Flurry Heart).
Maybe have Spike and Misty going somewhere like, I dont know, potion ingredient hunting. And it's at an apocrathry in a town far from Ponyville. At the same time the Mane 6 could be in town because of a relative's birthday or wedding, funeral, etc.... Meeting of coincidence. (Sort of)
Still a cliche but at least it's not a cringe inducing one.
Keep up the great work
No...Zoophilia...
Are you dead
That moment when you realized. You fucked up
I just hope that this story ends with Spike and Twilight parting on good terms at the very least.
I don't know how but if Spikes never going back to live with or near Twilight I at least want him and her to patch things up and maybe even still be family, just long-distance now that he's living with Misty.
And the Twilight of this story can visit him at his new home every now and then and he can help Misty patch things up with Celestia. especially now that she knows there's a reason she destroyed her work.
I'm an appreciator of happy endings and all, so I hope you consider my proposal.
ways this story could go based on everything I've read so far.
1:spike helps misty patch things up with celestia
2:Misty helps Spike patch things up with twilight
3:Luna gives a 'what the hell hero' speech to twilight and friends
4:misty turns into a yandere
5:some villain comes out of nowhere to threaten equestria and only Misty and Spike can stop it.
6:A misunderstanding occurs if Spike tells Misty had been chatting with Luna and it leads to that tragedy tag living up to its name.
7:Spike helps Misty readjust to modern equestria, requires the celestia thing cleared up.
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I'm hoping for a few of those.
Please continue the story!