When grief and angry combine it's not a fun site to see. But when Friendships are forgotten what will have to be done to restore them?
Great chapter,So Spike have a new look, can't wait see how he use his new body and power.
Instead of his green slits for eyes they were now dark black.
Black is already the darkest color there is, saying they are dark black is kind of redundant. Unless you were going for jet black.
Awesomeness! I love Spike's new look and I cant wait for Twilight and the girls to see it and I know it doesn't match ,but this is the closest thing I could find encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?:moustache:q=tbn:ANd9GcTuRnU80oc87bNOUJI49iRrSysYxmjOuK6T2X_9XH0OWqTM2aRfPA and on your authors note you said flop ,but I'm not honestly sure what that means?I kind'a thought maybe you meant clop?
Amazing! A few grammatical errors but thats all. Keep it up!
Great chapter,So Spike have a new look, can't wait see how he use his new body and power.
Black is already the darkest color there is, saying they are dark black is kind of redundant. Unless you were going for jet black.
Awesomeness! I love Spike's new look and I cant wait for Twilight and the girls to see it and I know it doesn't match ,but this is the closest thing I could find
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and on your authors note you said flop ,but I'm not honestly sure what that means?
I kind'a thought maybe you meant clop?
Amazing! A few grammatical errors but thats all. Keep it up!