Thank you for the help and support in the comments I really appreciate it and hope you enjoy the story

Will we get to see spike telling twilight and the others off for treating him poorly?

This one seemed a little rushed but I enjoyed it overall I can't wait to read more :3

I agree with Deadman, it's a bit rushed, and I'm curious about what's going to happen, as well as two things: 1. why didn't Celestia notice or say anything about Spike being the servant, waiter, chef, and all that? Surely she would thank her own son for his diligence, rather than just saying it to Twilight, as if she had ANYTHING to do with it. And 2. It's a question that comes up in most of the "abused Spike" stories, but why doesn't he write to Celestia, explaining the situation? But then again, most stories, like yours, I imagine, won't contact her because the plot won't have much to do with her, so contacting her and all that won't work, but to the reader, that's an open question that never gets answered.

I'm interested in the story

So far every mare in this story besides the dream mare have been nothing more then abunch of bitches
But I also notice Luna seems to no something is going on with the young dragon. Most likely due to her seeing his dream