Twilight and Spike have been buddies for years. They are practically family. But, when they get into an arguement that escalates out of proportion, and hurt words are exchanged, Spike believes he is no longer loved and wanted by Twilight. However as days go by, Twilight realizes what she has done, and goes on a mission to find Spike. But can their friendship be healed?
Gut wrenching. 🙂😢
In my MLP story, I'll just say SPOILER, Spike actually dies, trying to save Twilight from getting killed from a Floodgater, and Dead Meat dies as well, protecting Spike in his arms.
Nice story so far you've created though. 😀
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Which one of your stories is that? And what kind of name is Dead Meat for a pony to have?
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Could you explain what you mean by "which one of my stories is that?" And I don't remember having a pony named Dead Meat in my stories.
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Starlight Nova is talking to me about this, bro XD Sorry for the misunderstanding. 🙂
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I haven't typed it out yet, but it'll be at the very end of the 9th part of my story. 🙂 And Dead Meat the Magical Mare is a very confusing character, but I gave him that name because he's been named that when he was born, after he had a near death experience at birth, but came back to life with magical abilities more powerful than Twilight's. And he nicknamed himself " The Magical Mare " cause he couldn't find another word to describe him as a nervous wreck, so he calls himself a girl for that reason lol 🙂 He's interesting, and I already introduced him in my 2nd part, Master Plan, first chapter.
Hmmm.... I see huge potential... You have my attention
Why is it always these stories that never get finished?
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Sorry, been working on other chapters and stories on Fimfic. Chapter 2 for this story is up.
Hmmm... Interesting to see Luna wanting to help Spike run away, but questions now are, how & why?
Keep this going, things are getting interesting.
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The why. Luna knows what it feels when you think you are not "loved" or "appreciated" by your loved ones or family.
The how........uhhhh......magic?
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I kinda forgot about this story until you just replied to my comment
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Lol
I hope this doesn't die. Not only is it good, but it's cruel that so many people would leave stories like this unfinished. I'm still aching over Spike's Journey and I read that years ago.
This was worth the wait, now its Twilight's turn to be heartbroken!
Can’t wait to see what happens next
Abd should be and.
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Thanks for the correction. I changed it.
Yay update!
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What do you think?
I think your doing a good job so far and I’m intersected in seeing how this will end
Alright so Spike's now in the Dragonlands... What now?
Will a chapter be out soon?
Please keep going
I really hope this gets to be finished
*pokes with a stick*
Please be alive
Two things. 1. I forgot that this story still existed & 2...
it's spelled brother
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Thanks. Yeah, just re-reading it, and I changed it.
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Welcome & sorry if I sounded like a grammar jerk
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No, I welcome your grammar corrections. Auto-correct can be a weirdo sometimes.
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Indeed they are
Yay! XD
Completely forgot about this!
Continue please?
I’m not gonna lie that fight was pretty funny at the end
I just have gotta be honest I am pretty sure if I was writing something like this I would feel cringe and keep imagination what the scene would look like in my mind.