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Twilight Sparkle is the pony eager to learn any new subject! So, when she is told to study a new spell from Princess Celestia, the purple unicorn is ready to complete it. There's just one problem ... the spell turns her into a puppy! Now a different species, Twilight will literally have to live the life of a puppy in a world surrounded by ponies. Oh dog biscuits!
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Already 100% better than the original I wrote. I loved it. Well done, BlueCuddlePonyGhost, I would love to read more.
Don't worry, I'm still carrying on with The Lieutenant in my Armada Trilogy and other stories as well. The Latin idea was also a great idea. Thank you for crediting me as well, hope all goes well with this story.
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Technical yes. But in the original story, she was a unicorn. So i kept her a unicorn for this story. Unless I say in the story otherwise, Twilight would be an alicorn.
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Wow. Thank you.
Cool. I can't to read more!
You're welcome. I was going to credit you anyways
Yeah, since Latin never changes but is considered a "dead language", I felt it would work for the spell.
Is there some sort of mental compulsion with the spell? Because the issue of the vet' feel way too artificial, the leash too.
It make me remember those really bad fic about grown adult turned kids, with other adult who can't stop to treat them as kids.
You understand where I'm coming from? Because you change physically, does not mean, that those around you have to change how they interact with you.
It feel weird, forced and out of character, you're pushing the issue of change onto those who are not affected by said change, if Twilight started barking, and licking things, acting like a real dog, then why not, Spike could start to interact with Twi as if he was interacting with winona, but even then, the issue of the vet' and overall health, is rushed.
Your story would make more sense if Spike started by sending a message to the princess, since they are those who asked for the research on the spell, and they are due for a report.
I'll see for the next few chapter, to see where you're going with this, and because I like transformed protagonist.
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The original story I wrote was set between Seasons 1 and 2.
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Thank you for explaining the changes to Rafvtell.
By the way, how do you like the chapter?
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Thank you for the info. And don't worry, other ponies will interact with Twilight as a puppy
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It was very good, thank you.
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everything can go wrong
oh god the cuteness
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What do you mean by "the cuteness"?
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I know twilight is supposed to be a puppy but in my mind all I see is a little tiny twilight just doing all the things that a puppy does hence the cuteness
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Thank you for explaining. Of course Twilight is the same size she was as a pony, just as puppy now instead of a pony. :-)
And yes, she is cute.
Awww, so cute!
I like how Twilight is slowly turning, mentally, into a puppy.
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Glad you like it. More puppy mayhem coming soon
Spike when he will enter : bruh
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Haha. :-)
Not exactly, you will find out in the next chapter.
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And when is the next chapter ?
YOU SHALL NOT HAD SAID THAT!