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Verse_Walker
I hate doing a bio, short or long. Mostly because I never know what to put. So my fall back is if you want to know, don't be afraid to ask. I don't bite. much.
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i like this....more
There is a very good reason as to the hate for humans, no spoilers here though
Interesting
Well, Thou hast impressed us. Its not often we find a good human and changeling story. Or changeling. Or human. lol. Though we did notice some errors in grammar and punctuation. Thou mentioned needing an editor correct? We would be willing to try editing. Private Message me If thou would be ok with editing for you.
Great story.
7989430 no one like Bitchlestia
You named the guard after Foe hammer from Halo right? Cause that's the only thing I could think of after hearing her name.
7991605 Yeah always liked the idea of the little nods and references that get littered throughout stories. Also thought it would be a good name for a pony.
I certainly want to see where this goes but i like a few other dislike the fact you made celestia a bitch. I can understand caution, aloofness, and visable resentment, but the agressive physical hostilty seems so out of character to me. Even with that i will continue to read to at leaste see how this plays out.
7997811 She does have a reason as to why she is acting aggressively towards Walker. I will in time reveal her reason why but you must be patient, good things come to those who wait.
I cant believe there are no comments on this. This is a great story which is told in a different way than just the regular fics. Hope to see more chapters soon.
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Thanks for reading as much as you did. I do hope you change your mind on reading but I understand there are some stories I haven't read for a similar reason
(Cloaked figure) was used like 14 time in this chapter. You got to cut the repetition man.
Well thanks for making me look up a word i've never seen before. Although i do wonder why you used autodidact in the firstt place. Not saying its bad im genuinely curious as to what made you use that.
Everyone calls her a bibliophile all the time and didn't want to reuse it. So I looked up synonyms saw that and felt it fit twilight better.
Too bad i can't give you second like for this chapter alone.
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Out of curiosity, what made you want to give it the second like?
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I'm an avid reader in this site, and since i first began to read fiction i got sick and tired of authors that dump the information and quirks of the main character.
Granted, one has to start some where. But what gets me is, most people that do the info dump, don't follow throught. They tell how waky, or cool, or insane their character is and don't follow throught during he story as if expecting the readers to file the information for later and go back to it when the character does something that i didin't understand.
Now to the point.
Here you didn't tell us the quirks of your character, rather we find out little by little what makes the character tick with how he interacts with the people and the world around him.
I realy like that.
And with this chapter i find another layer , yet another peace of the puzzle that is Walker and how he persives the wolrd around him.
I hope i manage to get my point of vew across. and keep up the good work.
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You have definitely gotten your point across. I'm glad to hear that I have given one of my readers something they can enjoy. I do agree many writers tend to give all the information for their characters up front but for some stories it works. I do want people to slowly come to know walker, since he himself doesn't know who he really is.
Damn. Sometimes I forget that Walker can talk shit and crap out pearls of wisdom.
Did celestia really intended for walker to kill that guy? Or is he just imaginening that? I hope it's the latter.
hey, keep up the good work man. so far your first story is definately better than mine. i definately want to see this story continue.
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
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Link at his most annoying. "Well excuuuuuse me, princess."
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Never really thought about what any of them would sound like besides the ones that already have voice actors/actresses
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Not sure where you're going with that but it makes me laugh so I really don't care.
Pls tell me you'll be posting something soon. All I can say about this story at the moment is, "More Sir, pls more"
I actually curled my toes at that remembering what it's like. IT. HURTS.
It's a good story so far. I hope you have plans to continue it.
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I do intend to finish it. Don't worry about that. Worry about the time it'll take.
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When's the next chapter
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Tomorrow?
Next week?
Maybe a thousand yeasts?
Kumquat?
All these questions and more..... at some point.
My god. Why must you make such a vulgar scene! It was too funny!
I like so far.
Again I like so far.
That me cracking up I loved it.
Well thank you for the update bro
Good so far, can't wait to see where it goes.
So in this story Celestia a real sun butt right?
I looked it up.
Spirit of the thing. That's why you talk to them.
What?
Overweight? It's going to be one of THOSE stories isn't it? No thanks.
Raisins
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and this shall be what replaces this
It's almost a chore to read this story at some parts. The characters seem to spew out useless info and ramble in their interactions with one another. The way the story reads out in some parts is like a mixture of 3rd-person narrative and an unnecessary, lazy 4th wall interaction where the MC is referring to either the reader or some journal which is not established. I guess I'll keep reading to get to the conclusion but if it gets too bad, I'm gonna bail.
Can't go on reading this. The MC has a hatred for earth but also has no memory of his past life, which is a major plot hole. The 4th wall narration is poorly implemented and cringy at best. The grammatical errors are understandable if you don't have an editor, but they're still annoying to wade through. Overall, I found myself skipping through lines of text to see if it would get better, but it did not, so with this, I wash my hands of this story.
umm. that is VERY much wrong. never flick your wrist when throwing knives. always keep the wrist straight to the arm. if you flick it, it will always hit the handle and bounce off.
someone has watched the hitmans bodyguard.