When I woke up that morning I didn't know what my life was going to become. Looking back now, I wouldn't change it for anything. Even the worst parts were worth it in the end, because I got to be someone else for once.
Well, Thou hast impressed us. Its not often we find a good human and changeling story. Or changeling. Or human. lol. Though we did notice some errors in grammar and punctuation. Thou mentioned needing an editor correct? We would be willing to try editing. Private Message me If thou would be ok with editing for you.
7991605 Yeah always liked the idea of the little nods and references that get littered throughout stories. Also thought it would be a good name for a pony.
I certainly want to see where this goes but i like a few other dislike the fact you made celestia a bitch. I can understand caution, aloofness, and visable resentment, but the agressive physical hostilty seems so out of character to me. Even with that i will continue to read to at leaste see how this plays out.
It's almost a chore to read this story at some parts. The characters seem to spew out useless info and ramble in their interactions with one another. The way the story reads out in some parts is like a mixture of 3rd-person narrative and an unnecessary, lazy 4th wall interaction where the MC is referring to either the reader or some journal which is not established. I guess I'll keep reading to get to the conclusion but if it gets too bad, I'm gonna bail.
i like this....more
There is a very good reason as to the hate for humans, no spoilers here though
Well, Thou hast impressed us. Its not often we find a good human and changeling story. Or changeling. Or human. lol. Though we did notice some errors in grammar and punctuation. Thou mentioned needing an editor correct? We would be willing to try editing. Private Message me If thou would be ok with editing for you.
Great story.
7989430 no one like Bitchlestia
You named the guard after Foe hammer from Halo right? Cause that's the only thing I could think of after hearing her name.
7991605 Yeah always liked the idea of the little nods and references that get littered throughout stories. Also thought it would be a good name for a pony.
I certainly want to see where this goes but i like a few other dislike the fact you made celestia a bitch. I can understand caution, aloofness, and visable resentment, but the agressive physical hostilty seems so out of character to me. Even with that i will continue to read to at leaste see how this plays out.
That me cracking up I loved it.
So in this story Celestia a real sun butt right?
It's almost a chore to read this story at some parts. The characters seem to spew out useless info and ramble in their interactions with one another. The way the story reads out in some parts is like a mixture of 3rd-person narrative and an unnecessary, lazy 4th wall interaction where the MC is referring to either the reader or some journal which is not established. I guess I'll keep reading to get to the conclusion but if it gets too bad, I'm gonna bail.