When I woke up that morning I didn't know what my life was going to become. Looking back now, I wouldn't change it for anything. Even the worst parts were worth it in the end, because I got to be someone else for once.
8374683 I'm an avid reader in this site, and since i first began to read fiction i got sick and tired of authors that dump the information and quirks of the main character. Granted, one has to start some where. But what gets me is, most people that do the info dump, don't follow throught. They tell how waky, or cool, or insane their character is and don't follow throught during he story as if expecting the readers to file the information for later and go back to it when the character does something that i didin't understand.
Now to the point. Here you didn't tell us the quirks of your character, rather we find out little by little what makes the character tick with how he interacts with the people and the world around him. I realy like that. And with this chapter i find another layer , yet another peace of the puzzle that is Walker and how he persives the wolrd around him.
I hope i manage to get my point of vew across. and keep up the good work.
8374725 You have definitely gotten your point across. I'm glad to hear that I have given one of my readers something they can enjoy. I do agree many writers tend to give all the information for their characters up front but for some stories it works. I do want people to slowly come to know walker, since he himself doesn't know who he really is.
Too bad i can't give you second like for this chapter alone.
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Out of curiosity, what made you want to give it the second like?
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I'm an avid reader in this site, and since i first began to read fiction i got sick and tired of authors that dump the information and quirks of the main character.
Granted, one has to start some where. But what gets me is, most people that do the info dump, don't follow throught. They tell how waky, or cool, or insane their character is and don't follow throught during he story as if expecting the readers to file the information for later and go back to it when the character does something that i didin't understand.
Now to the point.
Here you didn't tell us the quirks of your character, rather we find out little by little what makes the character tick with how he interacts with the people and the world around him.
I realy like that.
And with this chapter i find another layer , yet another peace of the puzzle that is Walker and how he persives the wolrd around him.
I hope i manage to get my point of vew across. and keep up the good work.
8374725
You have definitely gotten your point across. I'm glad to hear that I have given one of my readers something they can enjoy. I do agree many writers tend to give all the information for their characters up front but for some stories it works. I do want people to slowly come to know walker, since he himself doesn't know who he really is.
Damn. Sometimes I forget that Walker can talk shit and crap out pearls of wisdom.