When I woke up that morning I didn't know what my life was going to become. Looking back now, I wouldn't change it for anything. Even the worst parts were worth it in the end, because I got to be someone else for once.
I cant believe there are no comments on this. This is a great story which is told in a different way than just the regular fics. Hope to see more chapters soon.
Can't go on reading this. The MC has a hatred for earth but also has no memory of his past life, which is a major plot hole. The 4th wall narration is poorly implemented and cringy at best. The grammatical errors are understandable if you don't have an editor, but they're still annoying to wade through. Overall, I found myself skipping through lines of text to see if it would get better, but it did not, so with this, I wash my hands of this story.
“When using them remember it’s in the wrist. The arm only provides a little bit of power. It’s the wrist flick that adds the real power.
umm. that is VERY much wrong. never flick your wrist when throwing knives. always keep the wrist straight to the arm. if you flick it, it will always hit the handle and bounce off.
I cant believe there are no comments on this. This is a great story which is told in a different way than just the regular fics. Hope to see more chapters soon.
I actually curled my toes at that remembering what it's like. IT. HURTS.
Can't go on reading this. The MC has a hatred for earth but also has no memory of his past life, which is a major plot hole. The 4th wall narration is poorly implemented and cringy at best. The grammatical errors are understandable if you don't have an editor, but they're still annoying to wade through. Overall, I found myself skipping through lines of text to see if it would get better, but it did not, so with this, I wash my hands of this story.
umm. that is VERY much wrong. never flick your wrist when throwing knives. always keep the wrist straight to the arm. if you flick it, it will always hit the handle and bounce off.