• Published 10th Feb 2017
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Equestria Girls:The New student - Redrose99875



The girls meet a new student at Canterlot high, and it seems that he has an interest for a extremely pretty girl; Fluttershy

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Chapter Fourteen: A happy ending

Discord was on the ground, powerless.

the girls ran over to Fluttershy and embraced her, which she gladly returned, suddenly Fluttershy stopped and walked over to Discord

"Discord,....why did you do this?" she asked softly

Discord felt tears run down his cheeks while heat rushed to them

"Well, if I'm going to speak honestly,....it's because,....I love you"

"I KNEW IT!!!" shouted Pinkie, who silenced after the others glared at her

"I love you so much that I'd go as far as to force you to love me,.....but now I know, that you could never love me"

Fluttershy knelt down and held his hands in hers

"Discord,......I do love you" she said

"WHAT?!" shouted Rainbow

"FLUTTERSHY!!! HE TRIED TO TAKE OVER THIS WORLD!!! HE ALMOST FORCED YOU INTO DOING SOMETHING THAT YOU DIDNT WANT TO DO" shouted Rainbow in anger

"I know, and none of that would have happened if you hadn't interfered with our relationship"

Rainbow laughed nervously "hehe, point taken"

Discord looked at her, surprised

"Like Rainbow said, everything that she said was a lie, I do love you, but I was just too shy" she went a brilliant shade of crimson

"But.....How?" asked Discord

"You were so kind to me, I loved spending time with you" she answered

"Um,...I think we should go" whispered Sunset walking away while the others followed.

"You see,.....I was so shy around you,....but then you sang with me, and my nerves melted away, I soon realized that I wanted more than friendship, but I was too scared to ask, so I kept it to myself"

Discord looked at her, he ran his fingers through her hair, it softer than velvet, he didn't know what to do, so before he regretted it he kissed her, making Fluttershy go a deeper shade of red, but after a few minutes, she relaxed, Fluttershy broke the kiss,

"How long have you been wanting to do that?" she asked

Discord chuckled "Since day one" he replied
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"Thanks for helping us," said rainbow to Sonata and Aria

"No problem," said Sonata

"So what happened to Adagio?" asked Sunset

"She moved away, so I don't think she'll be a problem," said Aria

"Bye girls," said Pinkie as Sonata And Aria walked away

Rainbow turned around and saw Fluttershy and Discord

"So you two are a thing now?" she asked, her arms folded

they both nodded

"Well, you better take good are of her," said Rainbow walking up to Discord "Or your gonna get it" she punched him in the arm and chuckled, discord laughed with her

"Well, I guess that ends THIS story," said Pinke pulling down a shade

Author's Note:

The end, sorry for the short chapter:twilightsheepish:

Comments ( 7 )

The ending felt a bit rushed and anti-climactic. But, you did a good job on trying to build the relationships between characters. Keep practicing, and try to take your time with your plots/endings.

8001260 i agree, it was a bit rushed, but i like it anyway. they kissed so happy *fangirling intensifies*

8001260

Yes yes I know, but I just didn't know how to end it so I just put it out there:twilightsheepish:

Our heroes thaught this was an end but the thing they don't know is this was just a beggining

Nice story. You should do a spin off with Pinkie and Sonata

8824177
Well how would you feel if you wanted someone to pass you something YOU wanted and said no, then your friend asked them to pass THEM something and they said YES? :applejackunsure:

*fangirling intensifies*

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