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Redrose99875
I'm a girl who is a fan of MLP:FIM and is a MAJOR FLUTTERCORD SHIPPER/FANATIC...And other things too :3
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please make a sequel to this
If you do do a time skip maybe a few months to a year, make more sense that way.
Well, even concerning matters of love, I think Discord could do to be a bit more Discordy. It's an interesting story idea, but when you said that he made the wrong-decision in the summary kind of took a bit of the air out of the story-I think it's a little better when it's a surprise. All in all, the idea is good, but you could spend some more time on this. Also, a lot of times you missed some periods and commas at intense scenes, which took a little air out of those. I'd like to see a sequel, but it'd be nice if you could double check your punctuations and stuff and put a little more time in it. Keep practicing!
Hmm, it would be better if you had your one-shots as a multi chapter book, but it's still good!
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Thanks, you should see the sequel: She's gone
8054019 I have like five times.
*dies because of FlutterCord fangirl overload*
Cons: Almost too kind for her own good, Keeps Angel Bunny
I love how that last one's on there. I guess not even the master of chaos is safe from the rabbit.
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EEEEYUP
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I would love a sequel! But this is great! 😊😉