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A new writer getting into fanfiction who has an interest in of Friendship is Magic with personal interests and ideas to share.

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This story is a sequel to The Pony Guard: Equestrian Girls


Scar is defeated and the Pride Lands and Equestria is at peace once more but nothing is the same anymore as far as Kion and Twilight are concerned.

After seeing his friend struggle with being accepted back into her leadership role of the Pony Guard, Kion decides that a vacation is in order for Twilight for her to recuperate. Although said vacation turns into an world-stake mission when they receive a message from an equally struggling Sunset Shimmer in Canterlot High, informing them that three new students have suddenly arrived with a thirst and hunger for power at the school along with the world with new friends from the Pride Lands past helping them out.

The Prince and Princess along with both Spike and Bunga all travel through the magic mirror where they once again meets their bonded friends human counterparts of her bonded ponies along with a reformed but mentally scarred Sunset Shimmer, who is still struggling with letting go of her past. The Lion and Pony Guard band together to form, The Rainbooms in order to compete in the school's Battle of the Bands in order to defeat The Dazzlings and their Pride Lander allies, before they turn the whole school against each other.

Can Twilight regain her confidence in order to make the counter spell they will need to defeat their foes? Will Sunset Shimmer let go of her past in order to move on and help her friends?

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 34 )

Shot in the dark That’s not our Scar. I have a hard time believing he escaped Tartarus already

Yeesh, these people need to let it go. Scar manipulated her, she was just as much of a victim as they were.

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Sadly to some actions speak louder than words. And to those still upset at Twilight, her actions that fateful day will always deafen her words.

Okay, so my guess was wrong. At least to some extent. I still have some possibility of being right.

Anyway, so these Wild Ones seem to be basically an Anti-Lion Guard. Possibly an alternate version of Scar’s old team.

The equestrians and pride landers need to get over what happened with twilight

So apparently I was completely wrong. The Wild Ones are an anti-Lion Guard, but they were those original evil lions that were the reason Askari made the guard in the first place.

Well, looks like my original theory might actually still be a thing if that trio is who I think they are.

And geez, things are not going well for Kion. Hopefully he doesn’t lose control again, because that would not be pretty.

I’m guessing that the mystery man and those three are the human versions of daddy and his original minions

……That snake venom comment was on purpose wasn’t it?

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...Well...Yeah, essentially a jab at the canon story.

I mean don't get me wrong it was interesting, though I personally felt like they could have done his backstory a bit better to least make him sympathetic enough to understand why he did what he did through the film and the show.

It just could have had more potential if they went along that route. You know what I mean?

Ok this is bad sunset and twilight being arrested not the chapter just to clear things up

Wait so, In the human world Scar still has his Lion Guard and he isn’t evil?

Yeah, I don’t trust this “Secret Service”

A Scar by any other name is still a Scar

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I hear you. And believe me when I tell you that things are about to get worse before they get better.

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Not exactly his Lion Guard, and considering that Scar's human counterpart is an federal officer, he is not evil.

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Don't be too sure on that just yet. There's still more story to tell.

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So does that mean in the human world Mufasa isn’t dead and he’s like the President or something.

I knew that those four were the human version of daddy and his former minions. But why doesn’t he have his scar and why are they agents. I thought that the human version of daddy would be evil, have his scar and his name be Scar. WHAT IS GOING ON?!

Yeah, but I wonder if Askari's intentions are really pure. I mean, I know the first Askari (from ages ago) was good, but then his namesake turned evil. And given that this Askari's agents are named the same after his counterpart's hyena minions... I wonder if this guy is really trying to bring down the Wild Ones for nobler purposes, if this guy has a hidden agenda for it.

So Kion just tried to kill someone.

Welp, there goes the Roar.

Although maybe the Lions might be willing to let this slide since sometimes heroes have to bloody their hands if they are forced to.

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Considering that the Wild Ones leader publicly humiliated him, set both Twilight and Sunset up to be arrested, with his speedy lieutenant nearly killing human Fuli, shot his arm, dealt him a huge defeat, all within 48 hours, so it's not hard to see that Kion very much snapped in this part, only for his and his partner's foresight in regards with the gun sparing any lives in the heat of the moment. If anyone was put into that position and put through something similar, it's all gloves off in that regard.

Oh, and for the record, he didn't use the Roar during the fight, and nor for evil.

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I wasn’t saying I didn’t see his point, I’m just saying that I’m expecting this dark side to come back in season 5

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I hear you, and I apologize that I misinterpreted your initial comment, I didn't mean it as a defensive reply. It was just a little share of analysis is all.

As for Kion's dark side, it'll definitely be a big plot point for him going forward though when it'll kick into play is still to be decided.

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Meh, I said some things in the past so I don’t blame you

Oh my god.

Well, there goes the Wild Ones.

I had a feeling that daddy would want to use Starlight Glimmer as his pawn. I just wonder how long till we get season 5 and I hope daddy is still watching the heroes. Did daddy see what happened in the human world with his human counterpart as an agent? I hope he has plans if he were to go to the human world. Sorry, I still have so many questions and I need answers

Great work! I can help you with Season 5

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Yep. And considering the crimes they committed it was probably the best way to end their story since the only other ending for them was a life sentence. They were never going to see the light of another day.

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I hear you and those questions will be answered in due time, but if you recall my last blog post, pegging me for answers is only going to test my patience and right now you're at strike two.

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I’m sorry, it’s just hard to wait and I die for answers, ya know. I also tend to get very anxious

Looks like the dazzlings and the wild ones are sent to prison in disgrace

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