It wasn't long since Scar took over the Pride Lands, and everyone is left now wondering what the best course of action for both Equestria and the Pride Lands future, while wondering how to defeat him with the upcoming Summit at the Crystal Empire their next best course of action.
But before any of that could happen, Kion had his new magically enhanced crown along with his sister's (really Twilight's) stolen by Sunset Shimmer, another former student of Princess Celestia's who seeks to achieve it's power leaving both Kion, Bunga, and Spike all following after the now villainous Twilight Sparkle for going after the unicorn.
There they all find themselves in a new universe where they all are all now humans in front of a high school where they meet their human counterparts who share a lot of parallel similarities to their friends back in their home world all living lives as high school students at Canterlot High with some testy tension underneath their skin deep down.
In order to get back Kion and Kiara's crowns back and stop Sunset Shimmer from unleashing her evil plan to take over both worlds, both Kion and Twilight have to work together and become Prince and Princess of the upcoming Fall Formal while having to deal with whatever trick she has up her sleeves.
But can they do it in the next three days, before their only way back to their world is closed off for the next thirty moons?
Only time will tell with teamwork and mended fences required in order to pull things through.
*Note (This takes place just after the Season 4 premiere in between Castle-Mania and Daring Don't)
Because of all the stuff going on, I’m gonna keep silent and only comment at the end of this story if I have anything to say.
I will say now that the premise shows promise of Twilight and Kion having to work together.
Even if I am deafeted I will always come back.
Aaww. Now that's sad.
But when Twilight does come back, and she is probably traumatised by what she did, and she has to face the music, I know Kion's going to be the shoulder for her to lean on.
This is going to be really amazing and i can't wait to see more coming up
And I can definitely assure that Twilight will face the music later on in the future for her actions and that it will definitely come down to the realization no matter for both sides Freudian Excuse is No Excuse in regard's to the former's actions.
Hopefully daddy’s gonna know what’s going on
Was that, Rani? Human Rani?
Great job on this chapter, and man Kion and Bunga turning human, I thought they would be something else since they were animals from Africa in the pride lands, though this takes the cake, and not to mention Kion bumping into someone that is like a human version of Rani, because I could tell, for real though I could tell, even with the description, but not sure and now Kion, Bunga and Spike will be looking for the two crowns and hopefully stop Sunset from using them and stopping evil possess Twilight from obtaining them. Anyways, awesome job, keep up the great work.
Woohoo! Glad that’s cleared up also just because what you did worked in one of your stories doesn’t mean it will always work. It worked in season two but here it just feels Twilight’s being petty and whiny.
Don’t you mean Kion?
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Fixed, and thanks.
So... Will you change the Dazzlings' outcome because I don't like that ending.
I have a feeling Twilight’s got something up her sleeve that way after the crowns are brought back, she tell daddy about the powers they possess and about the human world. Another thing
She’s not turning against daddy already, is she? There so much he has yet to discover, understand and use to his advantage and I want to see that. I also think he might discover the sirens in Rainbow Rocks and might want to have a talk with big sissy (Adagio)
Oh so after going all evil & manipulative plus issuing death threats and actually getting creatures KILLED Twilight has the gall to ask Kion to trust her??? Yeah good luck with that lady!!!
Not sure what her game is here, at the very least if she tries to run away with the crown I hope the element of harmony inside it zaps her good! I know you said that there's good in her actions here but I have a VERY HARD TIME seeing it after recent events, plus it still doesn't excuse all of what she has done till this point. Hope the boys don't let her be totally in charge nor trust her completely!
All I have to say right now is truce between them for the current situation is ok, trust on the other claw HA not likely!
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Granted, Twilight doesn't expect any trust in return and is only seeking to ensure that Sunset doesn't obtain the crowns.
Like I said before, the debate whether it's really the good inside is really there will be answered later on in this story and should there be she'll definitely have a long road ahead of her in earning it to which I think can arrange no problem as story goes on.
We'll just have to wait and see how this plays out.
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We'll see when we cross that bridge. There's still a movie and a season to get through before we reach Rainbow Rocks.
Wow. Kion twilight and sunset, a three way crossfire. That’s something you don’t see every day, and even though twilight dark side is taking co control of her, I know that twilight is smart and doesn’t trust other villains since she knows that. And even though twilight is evil I know that a good side of her is still in there somewhere, trying to regain control of her mind and body
I kinda have a feeling that Sunset and Twilight will turn into demons, but how will they be purified? Also, I really hope Daddy knows what going on
he’d learn about another world that he’d want under his command
It sounds like Twilight’s starting to rebel against daddy. I hope he’s watching and listening because he won’t be happy after that little confession. Or, does Twilight actually have something up her sleeve to help daddy because I highly doubt all the darkness in her is already purified.
Oh Please let daddy know, I want him to know, there’s a whole other world he could conquer and once magic’s in it he’ll no doubt want it
What about the human Kyoga?
Sorry if I’m asking too much, there’s just so much I want to know
It’s been five days, when are the next chapters?
Well, I did say that I’d get my review once the story is over. So here is what I have to say.
Sparkle’s whole thing about becoming a better ruler and guiding her subjects to safety. I have a hard time believing that as she joined Scar pretty much solely for revenge. You can’t use his backstory as a factor as she already was working for him at that point in time when he told her.
You say she is gonna face the music when this is all over. This season is still young. But like I said before, the more evil she does, the harder forgiveness will be and the stronger that music will have to be.
She claims to have good in her, but her actions paint a picture that is showing otherwise.
I’m glad daddy knows that Twilight might rebel and he has plans for that; better keep an eye on her, and let me guess that mysterious male voice was Tirek? I also really hope daddy learns about the human world and there’s so much to discover and understand. I also hope they don’t plan on reforming daddy, he’s a great villain and I want him to stay one
Sorry, there’s just so much I want to know. One last thing though, I wonder if he’ll discover the Dazzlings in Rainbow Rocks.
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Well, it takes some time and more episode's events for things to unfold before properly judging something.
I mean for all we know, it could have been a rash and short-sighted decision to pursue revenge from the start, and it could be a case of good buried deep inside the darken heart.
And regards to the backstory that maybe just maybe, might have sparked some desire for Twilight's motives aside from being further motivated in supporting Scar.
Apparently it's clear that I'm going to write up some scenes just to make it clear that Twilight has not fallen into the same black area Scar has fallen into, because I'm really trying hard work magic to this story and also and truthfully quite frustrating at this point trying to make sense out of all of this.
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We’ll have to wait and see.
I will say that my interests have been more positively peaked by this ending.
There's still hope for Twilight to see that Kion is right about Scar and will soon return to the Lion and Pony Guard, where she rightfully and both Twilight and her friends will indeed apologize to each other regarding certain incidents like the Changeling Invasion at the Wedding and believing Scar's lies