Jean was a simple seventeen year old guy, living with his big sister in east philadelphia. He was a big geek, played video games, pen & paper role playing games, watching cartoons and anime. until he was sent to Equestria.
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...wait, so Palutena is marrying Celestia which makes Luna her sister in law who is planing to court Twilight who is about to be adopted by Palutena and is the sister of Shining Armor who weds Cadence who is the adopted niece of Celestia. I know it isn't accurate but I can't help but be reminded of something.
7744678 I'm just blazing through this story, everything past arriving into Equestria has been a surreal and an enjoyably strange read. Family tree here is not at all fucked up compared to how some stories went. I vaguely recall a story or two where some or all of the mane six were direct blood descendants... and the MC still got them
Silence! she shouted in the royal canterlot voice knocking down Sugar Sweets he tried to get back up but the residual shaking of the room made him lose balance and fall down, Once he gathered his wits he turned to glare at Palutena, but what he saw froze him in fear, the light rippled off of her and the magical pressure was sending tremors through the ground. A pipe organ began to play music out of thin air as she descended down the dais with deliberate slowness, her aura flaring brightly,
The video that you have linked has failed I thought you'd like to know that if I ever come across any more I'll let you know.
So... it's a good read but there is a detail that keeps repeating and it grates me. You change between first person pov and third person pov way too often and in the same sentence too, it is just confusing...