Jean was a simple seventeen year old guy, living with his big sister in east philadelphia. He was a big geek, played video games, pen & paper role playing games, watching cartoons and anime. until he was sent to Equestria.
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Name: Black night sun
Cutie mark: has a purple backdrop like Nightmare Moon but with a black sun instead of a moon
Special talent: a natural in strategy ,planning and light and dark Magic
gender: male
Species: Alicorn Dragon hybrid
Color scheme: black body with ether reel Green Mane with miniature suns in it
Bio: my character does not like to do much work but hates when things do not go to his perfect plan he is extremely cockey and very protective of those he cares for but does not trust easily because he has been betrayed by almost everyone he has ever felt close to including friends and family because he's different so he usually tries to push people away by acting like an ass so he doesn't get hurt again he wants to be the goddess/God of order so he could heal his blind severely ill mother who has Heart and Lung problems he has the mentality that easily let him put himself in pretty much any scenario and figure out how to manipulate it to the best possible outcome
Hobbies: watching YouTube equivalent ,reading fiction/fanfiction , coming up with all kinds of scenarios and figuring out the best possible outcome
Likes: his Hobbies ,his mother, and things working out how he wants them
Dislikes: things not working out, rapist ,child abusers ,raciest, everyone in this family that is not his mother, his so-called friends working hard and everyone that has been mean to him
Dreams for the future: finding a way to cure his mother and finding a true friend
Dark Magician : That's the third Equestria I saw going anthro.
7777730 lol XD
7777948 this is what happens when people don't pay attention to the crossovers, in this case hello, stranger https://www.fimfiction.net/story/252913/hello-stranger for future reference all crossovers I do have information pertinent to the story.
7777948 and for reference http://www.fimfiction.net/story/252913/28/hello-stranger/covert-operation-become-orgy is the start and the two chapters following that one.
name: William Aether
gender:Male
race: Lynx/Great Horned Owl Griffon
colors: dark brown main body, honey, and caramel for the spots. Chocolate brown head, with dark brown accents.
bio: Aether is a scholar and playwright by trade, with tendencies to be an avid sportsgoer, music-lover, and fine diner (when he has the money to spluge). He has lived a somewhat sheltered life, and as a result is very shy around new people (not to fluttershy levels, about half that) and also very easy to tease. He has a thick skin suprisingly and doesn't let much bother him in terms of emotions, he was also trained in martial arts by his father, he has never even thought of being in a relationship before and he is kind of an oblivious oaf around ladies unless they are direct as in 'I want to date you' way. when confronted this way he is ussually a stammerer and can hardly think straight, he has a wide range of what he considers attractive so that often comes to bite him in the butt when it comes to relationships. He is generally kind and courteous to all around.
hobbies: reading (while ussually listening to music), going to sports games, cooking (he is acctually a decent cook), taking walks.
dislikes: noisy neighbors, worms/caterpillars, pranks, and people that are evil for the heck of it.
dreams: to make a master play and to bake the perfect cake.
OH OH can I have an OC cammeo? If you say yes, it's an griffen named Ironwar ,real original I know, who is the founder of warhammer universe in you universe.... due to meeting the chaos gods and living with some souls chaos space marines inside him. One from each chaos god. No one else can see them unless it's a god/ness or someone who knows what to look for. They can kind of do stuff in the real world due to chaos gods bullshit.
It's like a ghost but without being able to prouesses people. If Ironwar dies, they get unspeackable things done to them by there chaos gods. The reason they did it was mainly there borde to all hell.
Hey are the CSM(chaos space marines)
Rhydire is a chaos marine for Khorne. He likes to try to get Ironwar to go into a bloodrage and make a skull throne.... he also likes cats and kittens.
Nazulock is a chaos marine for Tzeentch. No one know what he likes or if he even an he. He or she tends to mess with people in the real world and look through there stuff and may take someall of there stuff
Futrax is a chaos marine for Nurgle. He mostly acts like a really drunk guy who is also really sick with something. He tends to try to spread it but when it goes to the real world it gets really week and can't kill, only really pisse someone off about it. It's like a bad cold but in stead of a few weeks its a few months.
Kel'sax is the onlyknown female chaos marine there, she's with Slaanesh. She othens tries to get Ironwar to sleep with anyone she can find. She mainly just gives someone really bad blue balls or whatever it is for girls. So also uses this to get information about anything. Shes into it all, BDSM, forced, caribou, three some, and more. Even tentacles ones.
Ironwar is pretty much someone who really melo and tries to balance off the chaos marines in him. He uses their past and history to make a very successful book series. With small changes, a few name changes, a few name plantes, a new race. You know, small ones. He is often stressed out so Kel'sax is often more successful in trying to convert him to chaos as she *distress* him. But his soul is like a doom marines so they got a lot of work to do to even get to one persent corrupted.
Well there's my OC, I hope you like him.
7778441 sigh she is still pregnant so is Celestia, and she does mention it and ffs do you people not read the crossovers, you do remember this is a displaced fic right? Hello stranger is a three chapter crossover with avarice the fertility goddess and Asphyxious that happens in chapter eleven where she gains those powers and gets even more pregnant. >.< and where Crescent came from as well gah!?
7778441 celly has loved the main character from since nine hundred years ago and Palutena's questions answered what happened in the past regarding that, Luna was beaten to the punch by Rin so that's not her fault regarding the petrification. So Luna hasn't really been doing anything aside from ruling the country. And there has been only two time jumps and that happened because time between displaced worlds is variable and one was a time skip because nothing Important happened.
7778425 can you clear this up so it's more legible?
7778425
7778631 I vote for ironwar's OC!
7778631 Um ok. a really maello teen who just left the house and about a few miles away he somehow gets stuck in the warp. Where he meets the chaos gods of warhammer. They know about his world and where but do to the other gods and discord they can't be there and no one who follows them outside of the world. But they can go to this world if they have followers in it.
So they got my OC by random luck but knowing Tzeentch I doubt that. So they each put a soul a chaos marine who failed in their task so they falled them. Not every good ones ether so the other gods won't stop him from coming back until its too late. They had to keep my OC mostly the same as when they found him so he isn't a chaos follower.
That's where the chaos marines with him came in. As they start corrupt him into a chaos follower ( they each want him to follow there chaos god so they fight a lot) when Ekwensu finds him and not gets rid of them but make it Super hard for the chaos marines to turn him into a follower. His *official* reasons are that they may be needed if Palutena fails in her task and ends up the same as harmony but in reality he's just bored.
So my OC now has to live with these marines turning to get him to follow chaos so they can invade. As he go on his travels he can't hold a job due to the chaos marines in his body messing it up. So he starts to be an old pastime of his and starts writing stories when an idea hits him. Why doesn't he ask the asshats chaos marines about there would and the universe that often invade the most and published the pony version of warhammer called Aether's Hammer( if I went with warhammer it would just be too easy) and it's a hit and as it gets a fan following the chaos marines get a bust in there power allaying them to change the physical world too a point and if it involves there chaos gods.
This is how each of them look
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Tzeentch encrypted-tbn2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQFm5cCifX5DcCpgGZ3xeX11QG_H0EC92d2ceCbsbp4T4xQzeV3uQ
Nurgle orig04.deviantart.net/957e/f/2014/311/5/b/nurgle___chaos_space_marine_by_helgecbalzer-d85kair.jpg
Slaanesh s5.postimg.org/4216jgpt3/Miriael_Sabathiel_Servant_of_Slaanesh3.jpg
and my OC Ironwar derpicdn.net/img/view/2012/11/10/147556.png
Does this help? Also here's for the vote 7778713
7778800 yes much better
7778921 if that is how you feel unfavourite this story right now. You are obviously not enjoying it. And you obviously have not read the next chapter.
... 'looks back to last crossover.'
'Looks at Discord with all his power and not even noticing a drain.'
So... How does this work?
7779242 he is drained, the chaos of the GGG helped but there is a reason he isn't going around doing what he is in the show even the stuff Palutena said was ok, in fact the only thing he did do was change Celestia's form and that took most of his power to do that and maintain it. And while the chaos caused by Palutena will restore him that will take time. There is also the intervening chaos created after Rin absorbed his power as well.
I can't finish this chapter, it's too painful to read
Maybe later
7778800 They all look so awesome, and it's nicely panned out, too.
7779741 thx I thought them up on the spot.
Sorry to say...but I feel like the story kinda lost its charm ...not to mention I am at a lost of what the hell is going on so...Eh, sorry but this is where a fold.
It's was great while it last.
Good luck with the story.
Once more I tried to read this
I failed
I'm done with this story *sigh*
7806598 from. The Beating of my heart a dungeon keeper displaced who is a feral fox lady
7824099 I take it you didn't bother to read the three chapter crossover with avarice she is now pregnant with six foals.
7778557 Don't expect people to read chapters of another story just so they can keep up. While it's ok to have crossovers, make sure that your story can still stand on it's own, which can be easily fixed by just giving a brief summation of what happened in the crossover chapters. Otherwise it comes over as bad writing and just plain laziness, to be honest.
After all, people are reading your story, because you wrote it, and they want to see how you will continue it. You can't fault people for not wanting to read another story by someone they don't know. For example, say you're watching your favorite tv-show, and there is a sudden break. Then you are told to watch a different show just so you know what happened, since your favorite tv-show does not give a recap of what happened to the characters while they were on another show. Would you happily watch that other show?
Put simply, people don't like it when they are 'forced' to do things they really shouldn't need to have to in the first place. (I say forced with quotations, because you can still read on without going to the other stories, but then you miss half of what is happening anymore, as is seen in the comments by now.)
7865296 this is a displaced fic crossovers are a big thing, koe if they read it not expecting to read the crossovers, why are they reading a displaced fic. as for standing on it's own it can, they'll just miss important parts that will be referenced later.
7865296 UM I read other crossover chapters :/ and plus it's awesome to see new displaced :P keeps me entertained until halo wars 2 comes out XD
Ps. THE NEW MASS EFFECT GAME IS MLG BITCHES!!! *NERDGASM*
And now Palutena is invincible, "Nanomachines Son"
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Not entirely