Jean was a simple seventeen year old guy, living with his big sister in east philadelphia. He was a big geek, played video games, pen & paper role playing games, watching cartoons and anime. until he was sent to Equestria.
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Man, Nemesis must love the Count of Monte Cristo. Also, you forgot about her, REVENGE WILL BE SWIFT!!!!
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oh the lolz...need to catch my breath b4 i pass out
Read up to chapter 12 and just stopped... I just.... What in the fuck is going on? Seriously?
One moment they're some genderbent palutena, the next they're some fuckin' hybrid fuckery. Pacing is terrible, you're introducing characters before even setting a baseline for those already in the story. There's no flow to this at all, it just stumbles from one crossover to the next. There's no progression, no depth...
The whole story just feels like a dolled up version of two robots conversing.
--I will do this
-ok
-Let's have babies
--ok
--I'm a mutated dragon pony god thing
-ok fug time
The story didn't just derail, it fucking exploded killing everyone on board.
Where's the story?
Where's the character building?
When is the next chapter coming out
8005565 as soon as I can been busy.
8005769 ok
Why haven't I found this yet
8037817 found what? The story or the chapter?