Jean was a simple seventeen year old guy, living with his big sister in east philadelphia. He was a big geek, played video games, pen & paper role playing games, watching cartoons and anime. until he was sent to Equestria.
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Not sure what to say.
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The pace is a bit slow with the crossovers, but it is a part of the story...
What I meant is the recent chapters feel like fillers....
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Welp, let's see what's next.
7743016 how do you mean 'A bit slow with the crossovers' do you mean you want less or more? Or is it because almost nothing significant happened?
7743019 It's more along the line of nothing significant happened.
The plot seems to move forward at a World War 1 tank's pace.
Edit: Or maybe it was colored by my bias of long chapters in stories. Thus, I consider two or 3 chapters and the plot haven't moved much as slow.
7743044 sigh I can't seem to win, normally it's omg this pacing is too fast, now it's too slow you commenters are making oneechan cry :(
7743064 Can't help you there.
The pacing thing in my opinion is actually something that constantly moving. It sometimes sped up, sometimes slow down as appropriate.
It doesn't stay the same throughout the whole story.
Not to mention the update rate also affect the feeling of plot speed.
Readers who joined the story late will experience the plot speed differently from the ones who tracking the latest chapters of the story.
I just now realised what the name for Rin's city is. Cleaver, very cleaver.
7743175 yes let's also hope it doesn't fall to bahamut or the invincible.
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to late
7743371 lol, I thought you meant the final fantasy 9 Alexandria not the one that's a real ancient city
7743379 GOD DAMN VID- naaaa can bring myself to say anything bad about video games. I also not a big fan of FInal fantasy.
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I did name the city after the actual ancient city, which was known for it's library which made copies of every bit of knowledge that came into its reach. The Final Fantasy city never crossed my mind.
7744112 lol the great library, I have had dreams of being the librarian of such a place, all that knowledge all that wisdom. *Salivates*
7744112 I know and that's what I said I'm my original comment. I only recognised it due to my history class having done Alexander the great last week.
I really like that you named it that.
7744678 oh gods not that song again XD
"Here lies Umbra he died as he lived laughing and telling the world to fuck off"