Jean was a simple seventeen year old guy, living with his big sister in east philadelphia. He was a big geek, played video games, pen & paper role playing games, watching cartoons and anime. until he was sent to Equestria.
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Now that was good. Scary but good poor Faust and Palu.
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How so?
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Well think about it. 1st point the doom marines now know what happened to Palu while she was being punished by Faust for something out of her control. 2nd what that void dweller did to Palu which they really can't do anything to because what Gilgamesh did and the fact that Faust felt the rage and hate from the marines and has no clue what could cause her to feel fear.
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That’s true, even though all of that hate and rage came from just one of them. But you are right about feeling sorry for Palutena’s recent situation she was put in, and even more so for Faust, for what Berserker is gonna do.
Anything else you liked about this, or wish to point out?
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Mostly I do so when I help proofread and edit the story but the intermission chapter was straight out of the blue for me so I was surprised a bit.
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Well, now you know what to expect from the Doom Marines, or Berserker, when the wedding comes around.
What did you think about Tzeentch and Khorne’s talk?
Good Faust gets what she deserves. Remember palu was more or less forced into the turnament that forces some of the oldest and most powerful of gods to fight mostly to the death becuse of pride. All becuse the lokal pantheon couldent accept her dating a fellow god of the pantheon.
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That, and because they feared Pally, since she can devour gods.
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I love how everyone just seemed to forget that it was said earlier in the story that Faust was out voted on that matter