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I would have wish to have seen how Shining was dealing with all the extra padding and see his whole world being enslaved. Still this was a good read.
7622528 Thanks.
Kinda wished that there was some more interaction with Shining, but this was still pretty good.
7622715 Glad you liked it.
7622715 Anything you'd wish to see in a sequel, if I wrote one?
7623975 Maybe some more super-sized weight gain with Shining, and Chrysalis as well, as well as more of him being in that brainwashed state.
7624451 Could do, could do. I was thinking of introducing some more love tanks, as well. Maybe a jerk this time, like Wind Rider or Svengallop.
Is a sewual possible? With a much "grander" empress?
7626429 Sure. Either that or one of her commanders.
With that much love, i'm surprised Chrysalis didn't grow morbidly obese.
7632250 She can't afford to -- being an Empress demands mobility. I understand that a few of her commanders are pretty obese, however.
What happened to the princesses? And how does Chrysalis choose her love tanks?
7643857 The Princesses were imprisoned. As for choosing love tanks, they're mostly picked at random, although in cases like Shining's, Chrysalis may choose them as an act of revenge.
...Seriously ?
7718224 Is there a problem?
7718252 ...No, but the endings "that was all a dream", it's almost always bullshit.
(Do not get me wrong, I loved your story)
7719163 Well, it is an alternate ending, i.e. non-canon. I just put it in there for anyone who wanted a happier ending.
Not sure why I read this, but I loved the depiction of changelings in this. Actually gave me an idea for a story premise: a poor pony is turned into a drone in this way, but she regains her mind once Chrysalis is deposed. However, her life is still ruined, and she has to come to terms with that.