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When a strange mare comes through Ponyville and asks Caramel to accompany her, then to follow her into the woods, he can't believe his luck. Unfortunately, she has something a bit bigger planned for him...
Contains: fat ponies, fat inflation, and forced weight gain.
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7588951 Nothing like some good ol' forced weight gain, am I right?
That... was pretty dang good! You should do more stories with this character.
Midnight Star is definitely my kind of evil
I'd love to get an expanded look of her exploits
hurhur c wut i did ther
7589023 Thanks! Maybe I will.
7589045 Go sit in the corner and think about what you just said.
7589062 Why don't you make me, mom
I think the idea was great, but I feel that you rushed it a little too much as I would have liked t o see Caramel having sex with her and go all slow with caramel noticing something strange happening to him but too distracted with the mare to really focus on what was happening ti his body. It would have been also great to see how his life was ruined by his bulking up.
Oh my, I do believe Caramel to be very much worse off. A farrier is fairly demanding job physically, and requires a fair bit of dexterity and strength. Even more so if one forges the shoes themselves.
Good bye any savings and a good bit of income, for quite a while yet.
As for Midnight...Karma has big plans for her I'd hope, and a massive scale to balance.
I do hope we get to see the grande-est of shows, with her on the center stage and maybe a few of her flings in the audience.
7589704 Yeah, I know it's a little fast-paced. Blame how tired I was after all the college work.
7589966 Oh, and there were a lot of flings, too. Including Braeburn in Appleoosa, incidentally.
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That'd be a great show, even more so with Twilight getting wind of a transmorgrifier with that kind of spell.
She might even use Midnight as a self sufficient test subject, knowing how efficient the pretty purple princess is with such research.
All it'd take is a horn ring with the right charm...
7590302 Good luck catching her, though. The closest they came was when two royal guards came to her cabin to investigate the disappearance of one Hazelnut. The next day, Hazelnut had one new companion in the basement, and Midnight had one new garbage disposal in the woods.
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I do believe a large enough count of victims and relatives and friends of an Alicorn and a few others would warant a bounty tied to her discription.
Unless she mindwipes them but the story doesn't really infer that.
Even so, the missing guards would only attract more attention, and possibly even more...unsavory members of the guard and Equestrian military as families and friends demand answers.
No matter how good one is at hiding and running, luck inevitably runs out.
Edit: even then, someone in town would have noticed her and Caramel leaving, and a few others would note how she was the last one with him.
I'm also marginally disgusted she'd leave someone in the middle of a forest as a disposal with the risks it'd entail, both for their health from exposure and animals, I doubt any predator worth it's salt would pass on a meal like that.
7590325 If it's any consolation, it was only a small grove of trees. It wasn't exactly the Everfree Forest. It's the sort of place where you could camp out for the night without fear.
She covered her tracks with the guards, too. The next day, their letters of resignation were received.
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The guard or Caramel? Even then left immobile out in the open leaves all kinds of issues, from cold to pneumonia and everything imbetween and even a few issues purely from that much weight on rotting grass and wet earth for extended periods of time.
7590339 The guards she captured. As for health issues, well... I'mma just use the same explanation for why Ponyville can shrug off monster attacks like it's nothing:
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7590350 arguably worse because thats just laziness and inhumane(or at least more so then she already is) at that point.
Either way, I do hope she gets a big ole helping of what goes around comes around, if only because she'd be beyond massive with an ass to match from the returns and bankrupt from reparations, and it'd be a brilliant read.
7590354 How massive are we talking here? Not really into mountain-sized blobs myself.
7590371 I'd leave the upper limit to your decision if you decide to write it, but I don't think many of her prior subjects would be willing to be merciful in their additions to her figure with how willingly she put them under such conditions, and considering the guards, their families would be more then furious, especially if they had foals. She also kidnapped government employees and soldiers at that, so depending on who and what the laws are in this version of Equestria, well, I don't see a diet helping and excercise even being possible.
7590378 Hmm... well, maybe we'll get lucky. Maybe one day she'll pick the wrong victim.
7590378 Well, not all of her victims were innocent. She once turned a pair of would-be muggers into big ol' tubs of lard, for example.
7590811 I'd still call them victims and by her spell's nature she would have had to go beyond anything really right as punishment on her own choice. And seeing as I doubt a mugger would even have the means to lose the weight without severe damage to whatever livelyhood they had if not outright leaving them homeless. Add to that the low chance that they weren't promptly targeted by someone with worse intentions when they couldn't fight back.
More so, she's earned more then a mugging with kidnapping and what I'll assume is abuse of magic by Equestrian law, so sympathy is in short supply for her if at all in that instance.
7590971 Dang. I set out to create a villain, and I made a monster.
7590976 More so you created a villian that someone like me can pinpoint and lockdown for every choice.
I tend to think about all the consequences an action might bring, no matter how simple and mundane the outcome seems compared to some truly monstrous acts, as sometimes it's a little thing that ruines a life.
You should turn this to a daily thing! Where she would come back and try it on other background ponies and even some well known characters!
I don't know why, but I wanna see how she'll get Diamon Tiara if she did. I only think that she would cause of how much of a spoiled brat she is.
If I could take caramel's place I'd do it in a heartbeat.
7624130 Really?
7624140 Really
7625019 I'd rather take Midnight's place, honestly.
Caramel with a big bouncing booty. Yum Yum! Interesting that the pony with the biggest plot in Ponyville under Hotshot's rule was Red Delicious, who's a palette swap of Caramel, and then this happens.
7627048 Indeed. I'm still thinking of new "playthings" for Midnight... Perhaps Double Diamond could make the mistake of asking for directions at her cabin?
7627052 Sounds good! And since Double Diamond is a laid-back skier, he'll just let it all hang out. No pun intended. His fat ass could even keep him warm on the slopes
7627072 That is, if she ever lets him go. She might decide that Hazelnut and that guard could do with a third companion...
7625033 the thing is i like the idea of being fattened up and stuffed so that's why :3
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Hey, if you're looking for ideas for another victim for her, I got a great one for Thunderlane.
7694122 Oh? Do tell.
7694148 I'll shoot you a message.
This is my kind of mare. And there's a sequel? Yes!
7814407 Hehe, glad you like her!