Not much to say about myself -- I'm an Irish guy whose interests include MLP, video games, and occasionally writing fanfics.
This story is a sequel to A Midnight Date
Midnight Star's got some new fun in for her -- a cute stallion finds her in the desert. Unfortunately for him, Midnight can't stand him from the moment she sees him. And when Midnight can't stand somepony, she pulls no punches in having fun with them...
Contains: unwilling weight gain, extreme obesity/blobsize.
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I don't like Feather Bangs very much. Can you tell?
What
8166270 Who, how and why?
This was a good story I was happy to see that you decided to continue it. I hope you will keep doing more stories with Midnight
So awesome!~ <3 Was waiting for another part of this mare's story! :3 Now I cant wait for more T^T
omg THANK YOU for adding another unwilling weight gain story. A moment on the hips is what made me follow, and I hope to see more!
And yet any predator would jump at the food.
Animals aren't nearly as picky nor as weight concious as society.
He's literally a massive jackpot for anything woth teeth.
I'm genuinely wanting to see this mare murdered brutally at this point.
8166775 Maybe not murdered, but punishment is certainly in order. Maybe stuffed a cave and forcefully fattened, until she's trapped inside by her own sheer girth.
Love the story mate.
8166775 Yeah... in spite of Shamrock's efforts to the contrary, Feather came across far more sympathetically than Midnight here.
8166606 Thanks! Always happy to provide!
8166973 Oh, now that I like the sound of.
8166775 8167039 To be fair, Midnight isn't exactly supposed to be sympathetic.
8166538 More will come, don't worry...
I'm surprised that some commenters are upset over what Midnight did to Feather Bangs. To be fair, she left him in the desert, the hottest places out there. Give it a week or two, and he'll sweat off at least a couple pounds. Not enough to move, mind you, but enough that he might be able to see again.
And besides, Feather Bangs is such a wretched character that any predator that dares take a bite out of him will instantly be repelled by his horrid taste.
8168264 "Ooh, who left this lovely meal here for me?" *nom* Ugh, he tastes like vapid personality and hair gel..."
8167308 I'm aware she isn my meant to be sympathetic, but at this point I'm more reading to see of she gets beaten to a bloody pulp and crippled for life then the fetish aspect.
And regardless of how horrible a character he is he's still got a cleaner slate then the majority of the main caste, he just doesn't have the entire country running damage control for when he's an abhorrent twat.
And with just that one line alone, Midnight has made herself more appealing and intriguing, than Feather Bangs could ever hope to achieve.
Glad to have Midnight back. Hope we see more of her in the foreseeable future. :D
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Heatstroke, doesn't require dehydration and can cause serious braindamage.
Ticks, mites, flies and other insects create wounds and carry serious deseases, as well as thrive in the folds of flesh he has, hightening the chance of bodily infestation.
Constant water logging from sweat will create festering sores and allow bacteria to grow on him, potentially creating a deadly infection from multiple species of bacterium native to living creatures skin and fur becoming dangerous as the begin to devour flesh.
Burning, plain and simple, as he's literally baked alive by the sun.
This is torture and mutilation alongside potential brain trauma leaving an individual little more then a heartbeat and lungs, hardly somethig I find amusing or fitting for someone who's sinply a stuck up douchebag.
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I see. That's quite the laundry list of problems there. Here's my solution: MAGIC.
Done!
8169358 Doesn't change the fact that her spell does nothing to prevent animals from affecting him, so that list of problems loses only a third of the conditions.
Also, counter point: saying because magic means you lack the imagination and skill to come up with a reason. In other words, thats the laziest reason in the world and a halfassed one at that.
Cowardly wench deserves every bit of pain she gets.
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You realize magic exists in My Little Pony, right? Celestia uses magic to raise the sun every morning. Is that lazy and halfassed too?
This is a fat fetish story, mate. It doesn't have to make sense, in fact, it shouldn't make sense. Porn takes place in a magical realm where normal logic does not apply. It might not make sense in the real world, but it makes sense in the context of the story.
8170959 I'm aware and the fact that it's a deus ex machina is part of why it bores me in the show, but lacking formula they try to vaguely explain a reason as to why the effect happens when they aren't monolouging.
Is the weight a non issue due to manipulated gravity on the individual or an enchantment strengthening the body beneath it?
Does the stasis operate on time or rather biology?
Is the gain caused by duplicating existing tissue or by converting magic into caloric content and storing it on the host body?
The fact that magic, by the logic of the story itself, doesn't keep Feather Bang from becoming a gangrenous infected ball of lard is still a point here.
Good job. I loved this.
8171531 Thanks!